The whole thing was giggle-inducing funny, but the ending was like the icing on the cake. XD

luffy wouldnt be a cat. he would just die from eatin 2 devils fruits

YAY! Zoro as a cat is so cute! Well done.

OMG... I was laughing so hard I couldn't breathe all through this. Especially the endin. I couldn't laugh out loud though because everyone else is asleep in my house and I would wake my grandparents and then get kicked off the net. but, awesome story. Very funny.

...O_o
Great. Now I shall have both the mental image of Luffy the cat hanging on the curtain.
I like the humor. It's funny without being overly perverted.

I really like your story .But there are some thing I'd like to comment on.

1. I think sanji has a lolly pop not a cigarette

2.I think his names zolo not zoro

But anyways i really liked your story it was funny ^-^

I read somewhere that if you eat more than one Akuma no Mi you explode... but perhaps it doesn't apply to juice! ^_^

DEFINITELY one of my favorites! Poor Luffy... I will give him a hug! As soon as he puts his clothes back on... *cough*

I loved the visuals. My favorite line, though, was the personal one of "causing yaoi fans the world over to die from massive nosebleeds and causing the author to burst into uproarious laughter because she is a git."
That made me crack up, becasue i got a visual like in monty python of the author cracking up at her own story, and it reminded me of myself writing everything i've ever done. the visual of the four poor guys clumped in the corner was hot as hell, but it was so funny. i feel bad for the girls, though. at least the guys were too distracted to notice. :)
Sweet!

Aaww... they seemed all so cute ^_^ and the ending made me fall off my chair because of my laughter!

Very very cute and funny. I loved it...