really good

The Plague I hate the way you think all OC's are like that you sound like 'melmel17' to me you and melmel sound so alike it's not even funny I say Kaligirl05 is a great writer keep on writing Kali

Why are 99.9 percent of all OC's in The Outsiders Section such HORRIBLE MARY-SUES and are SO OUT OF CHARACTER and SO NOT SET IN THE 60'S (Exactly like this one)!?

I mean seriously, girls BARELY wore pants at all except on the MOST CASUAL of occasions. They wouldn't even wear them to school or the movies! They wore sweaters and plaid skirts below their knees, Not low-riders and leather pants and mini-skirts and mid-drif tops or ANY of that stuff! EVER!

And they had nice, simple names like Jane or Sharun. Not Sage, or Blade, or Nickolai, or Willow. And girls NEVER let their hair grow down to their back like 100 percent of these OC's out here. Not unless they were hippies. Plus they all manage to have long black hair and peircing blue eyes. It's a wonder how you can tell any of them apart. And there weren't gothics and emo's and cutters and stuff like that. Totally unbelievable, and just you trying to plug yourself into the story.

And I am so SICK OF YOU PEOPLE PAIRING THESE MARY-SUES WITH GREASERS! That is SO OUT OF CHARACTER! Ponyboy CLEARLY said that he liked girls who wore their hair decently, and their skirts a decent length, who didn't wear a lot of make-up, and didn't swear too much. He practically said that he didn't like greaser girls! So why would he like this girl?! Exactly. He wouldn't.

Johnny is SCARED OF HIS OWN SHADOW. He is shy! So why would he just all of a sudden walk up to some horrible excuse for an OC and say. "I love you" and just start making out? He wouldn't. Especially not when he just met her last week. Like most of these horrible stories.

Soda JUST got out of a relationship! He LOVED Sandy! He GOT HER PREGNANT! (And if you didn't understand that after reading the story then you should just give up fanfiction.) He was going to ask her to MARRY HIM. Why if all of a sudden some Mary-Sue showed up, would he just forget about her and fall for her the instant he saw her? Answer: He wouldn't.

Darry barely has time for his own friends from working all the time to care for Soda and Ponyboy. So how could he have time for a decent relationship. The girl would probably be sick of him blowing her off for work or something. Again, totally unbelievable.

And most important of all. And listen closely. DALLY DOES NOT LOVE ANYTHING OR ANYONE. Clearly in the book, it said the ONLY THING HE EVER LOVED WAS JOHNNY. Now, apparently some of you have a problem with that so I'll say it again. THE ONLY THING DALLAS WINSTON EVER LOVED EVER WAS JOHNNY CADE. Not some Mary-Sue who just moved to Tulsa, not Soda's twin sister. Not Johnny's cousin. NO ONE ELSE. He had a burning hatred for Socs, and everything in life because it was so ** him. So it is totally out of character to have any kind of Dally romace. It's disgusting.

And since all of you Sue-thors have such a problem understanding that. I'm just going to keep flaming until you get it through your skulls. Stories like these SUCK. And only aspiring Sue-thors like yourselves even bother reading past the girl's description because they already know what's next.

Please learn how to write a good fan-fic. Because ** like this puts good books like The Outsiders to complete and utter shame.

-The Plague

Great story! Loved the way everything ended up in the end . . . except for Dally's life (even though it probably would've ended up like that somewhere along the line). Post another story soon!
~ SodasGurl4Ever

Thats great, Dally jumped off a bridge, bout damn time!

Dally: What?

Nothing dear...

omg, i can't believe its over! i know i say that every time a story ends, but still, i can't believe its actually over! its so hard not to say update, you know?

theres nothing funny about that... besides ITS ALWAYS THE QUIET ONES

Wonderful chapter as always Kali, update soon!

keep it up tel Johnny hi for me lol
love ya
angel

how the hell can she be the only suspect, there were other witnessess! she was seperated from him by a god damn wall! what is she gonna do? scream "you go kill my husband" at the top of her lungs in a place crawling with witnessess? UPDATE!

♥ wow, so much action. Nicki and Dally have a baby, Kali and Soda are getting married, and now Soda is hurt. This story is going pretty good! Keep it up! Anways update soon! ♥

-krissy-

good chap Soda dont die and Kali hold on i'll save u lol
love ya
angel

AH *screams at top of lungs*

u better make it to the ulter this time or i will have to hurt u for hurting him again. lol yeah i'll come back from the dead and kill u not really but hey just DONT HURT MY BROTHER OR U WILL NEVER TALK TO HIM AGAIN hahahah lol
keep it up
love ya
angel

update! tyler? hm... whoever the hell he is better not ruin my wedding.

whats up with the cliffhangers? *shakes you violently* are you trying to kill me!?

UPDATE!