I love the way you wrote Mystel! Sounds exactly like things he'd say. Well-written story -- good work!

Lin: that was so cute!!

Kay: I agree, it would seem like a typical friend story

Lin: but if you look it really is sweet!

Kay: Why are you shrieking?

Lin: Hyper!

Kay: You ate chocolate? again? Wait! there's only one chocolate left and that's...mine!!

Lin: Uh... would you look at the time I haf'ta uh...go to joy's house! BYE!

Kay: Come back here!

i liked it! it was just so... plain and simple... well to me it was just pure friendship... hehe... i loved all the descriptions... something i'd always expect from you... sometimes i envy you... how you can update and i'm still stuck in the three-month-writer's block... TT_TT it's so sad... lolz well hopefully i will get out of this annoying... writer's block... lol love your stories!

Okay, well I FINALLY read it. (Sorry for taking so long) But this was so good. You have a wonderful style, incredibly mature and well rounded. I'm so glad that you posted this, it's really good. It's rare to find GOOD writing here, and I'm so proud to say that I know someone who is a good author. I liked that it wasn't a romance fic, I think this was perfect. GREAT job.

Nyah! This story was super cute! I'd forever love you if you continued it :3

That was so cute! Heh, you could add more to it if you want, it's entirely your choice. Though I personally think it's perfect the way it is... ANYWAY! Yeah, more of a friendship fic than anything else -- but still absolutely adorable! Besides, it would have seemed completely out of place for them to exchange words of love and then kiss. I dunno... just the whole setting and everything... But I loved it! Heh, how many times can I repeat that...? Well, keep up the great work and write on!

Hey, this was great and I loved it. I never saw a pairing like this so it was great and so cute and funny at the same time. I never saw a pairing like this but saw a Mariah/Bryan fic once which was really cool. I just love the odd pairings, I dont know what it is I love about them. This was great adn I think you should continue it soon cos I love this. Bye for now sweetie and I hope we can chat tomorrow night. (hopefully I cna explain to you more about my secret of last time)

Very good ^^ I think you should continue!