 TAylorlatte girl 6/29/09 . chapter 5 SUPER DUPPER GOD!PLZPLZPLZPLZPZLZPLZPLZPLZ CONTINUE |
 AngelsHeart0908 9/5/08 . chapter 5Aw I really like the Maya in this story! Hope you update soon! |
 Akina 3/13/07 . chapter 5 Please write a new chapter soon. |
 jae maknae 3/3/07 . chapter 5Oopsie...I accidently reviewed at three...
Anyways, Update soon please! |
 jae maknae 3/3/07 . chapter 3Update soon please! |
 miriae lazy to log-in 2/17/07 . chapter 5 hahah nice.. At least Maya's asking Nina and the others for help..
hahha
Goodness.. Yuta should be well soon! Haha.. nice chapter.. very light and funny..
Ja
miriae |
 Izawa Riiko 10/27/06 . chapter 4 Keep it up! _ |
 SanaK68 9/6/06 . chapter 4Cool chapter! Great job! I hope you update soon! :) |
 paperscissors891 9/2/06 . chapter 4Aiya, Steven-san, an update! XD -claps-
And so the plot unravels...-shifty eyes- Maya's asking for Nina's help, huh? Whoah, she's really changed, huh? I mean, before, she used to be so cold...now she's nice. :D
Nina and Tsujiai are so cute together...XD -builds shrine in corner- That thingy with the boat was adorable; Ayu and Kaji got wet! Agh, that's such a nice image! Sopping wet, the both of them, and Ayu as red as a tomato! XD
How do you think up these things, Steven-san?O_o
Anyway...I have basically no time to elaborate, since I'm doing my homework...so, good luck on the next chapter! Sorry for the extremely short review, too._; -bangs head on wall-
...Ja! XD
.:!Lui Kerplunk Nahtzi!:.
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 justwriteitout 9/1/06 . chapter 4YATA(which means alright..dont know how 2 spell it really -.-U) ue story is so KAWAII! |
 AnimeRose93 7/31/06 . chapter 3The story is okay...I've always wanted Ultra Maniac to not end. I mean the ending kind of...sucked. But I don't like the idea of Maya and Yuta. It's so weird! |
 justwriteitout 7/26/06 . chapter 3hey! love the story. Hope u update soon |
 paperscissors891 7/24/06 . chapter 3Uwa...
O_o
Are Tsujiai and Nina really allowed to...eh...DO that in public? -wince- (You had a typo in the last sentence; it became 'Ayu' instead of 'Nina', so it's sort of like Ayu was in two places at once. Try looking it over, nya? _)
Your story has a really interesting plot; I'd never tried to look beyond the ending of Ultra Maniac. (To me, it just ended, period.) But your writing got me thinking of all the possibilities in continuing on after the anime.
Although I'd always thought that Maya really did love the Prince, but maybe after the initial honeymoon-phase had worn off...intriguing...O_o But I _do_ love YutaMaya! I just saw the chemistry between them in the 20-somethingth episode..._
You have a bit of trouble with present and past tense, though. Try rereading your story and checking if it's grammatically correct; I find myself doing that a lot, since I have a knack for mixing words up..._ And names, too...
But, anyway, I didn't have as hard a time as reading your fanfiction as I do other people's._ I really like this, and I hope you continue, Steven-san! _
Ja!
*Lui Nahtzi* |
 preppymoods 7/19/06 . chapter 1 nice story.. :] |
 SanaK68 7/16/06 . chapter 3Cute story! I hope you update soon! (: |