I'm not one for poetry but this poem had good rhythem and flowed well,I'm impressed and its a rare thing for me to be impressed t a poem.

Nice, very nice.

AWESOME! You're really talented. PoP rules!

Well that is a good poem and it imspires me to get off my lazy ass and do something. I doubt I could have come up with more than one rhyme.

It is actually good, but you forgot to add hte part where the prince fights the dark prince through the mental realm. ( Last level)

nice poem, it was good...the rhymes and stuff,though maybe
instead of telling me show me what happened. Anyway u dont hav
to listen 2 my advise. Just keep it up! :)
PS: hav u made other stories?