this so kawaii! i love it!

aww how sad, poor koki. and honestly i thought koki's name was koji, cause his brothers name is yoji. i'm a little slow! i love imadoki and i think you definetly made the same ties in the story, well exept the killing herself thing, it's erika who does that.

wow .I loved the poem .plzs write another.

Wow, that was very nice. I like how it really shows the pain that Koki went through. Please write some more!

Interesting poem...:] byee!

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