Oh my gosh, Roxas! No! Riku!

I'm one teary goo here. Oh gosh, no. How bitter-sweet and sad. I'll be off bawling now.

Aw, poor Roxas again. I guess it's good that Riku knows how to be soft, sometimes, and knows how to be observant, though it's obvious Kairi would've been much better in this situation. The fact that it's Riku, though, makes it alot more interesting to read, because Riku and Roxas have tension between them, and they're both cold loners when it comes down to it. Thank you so mcuh for writing this.

crimson-obsidian-rose

Roxas really got the short end of the stick. This was a lovely piece. Gentle and melancholy. Thank you for sharing.

this made me cry.
beautifully written.

Very touching...^-^

great story you should consider continuing this story i know you said one-shot but isn't it worth the try.

It seems that Sora has a bit of Yu-Gi-Oh! Complex... Ever hear of it? The DNAngel Complex? SPD? Oh wel... I feel so bad for Roxas... I've always liked the Riku/Roxas pairing... But it always had to be in weird circumstances... They're almost exactly alike and you get the feeling that they sorta kinda understand each other. I liked this fic. It was sweet and sad and pretty... Aw...

Aww that sad, poor poor roxas

Roxas needs someone to give him a hug, someone to look at him and see *him*. Riku makes a good kleenex, neh?

I love fics with Riku and Roxas. Not romance but something, you know? Like Riku is the only one Roxas WOULD be able to talk to. This was perfect!

Wow. It's so deep, I love it!! Bravo!

Gah. Oh my god. That was amazing. I really can't think of any other words. This one is just ... wow. Leaves me speechless.
Good god, you have a shitload of talent. Amazing.

Wow. I liked that one a lot. Very deep, very touching. Definitely an emotional one-shot. Well done.
~Mina~

I like this. It's bittersweet and sad. Poor poor Roxas...*shakes head sadly* But I like the concept! That Roxas can only really exist when Sora is asleep. *bows* This was nice, really nice. ^-^