Dude(ette).

If you've written 15 chapters and only gotten one review, it means basically give up on posting the story here. Theres grammar mistakes all over the place and Winky is nowhere near believable.

But you got a good style of writing, I've read other stories where the author can't write AT ALL. You're pretty good at describing things but this story just seems over.

Brilliant opening to a, no doubt, brilliant FanFiction!

I love the way you make it sound like it is the house elf writing, including all her feelings!

I am adding this to my favorite stories list! And am looking forward to reading some more sometime!

ox RachiePachie xo