Great work! I enjoyed reading it!

And for English not being your first language-- you did a great job! I've seen stories by people who have English as their only language and their grammer, punctuation, etc is horrible to the point of not being able to read the story!

Crookshanks has nasty cat farts?

That was a great story. A really good laugh.

lol, killer story...lol...

Nice read. Liked the book title, very JK-ish.

LOL! Very funny, especially the "Sweet Merlin's toecheese!" remark.

lmao!! This was really funny! I'm glad to see you trying something new. Again keep writing please!

*sniggles* Nice little piece. No offence, but somehow before even reading your story, by your ID name I had an inclination that you were a H/Hr shipper. Not one myself, however I find this piece refreshing, and never oppose pairings as long as the writing is good. And if you say English isn't your first language, then bravo!

Personally, I think Harry has had too much of adventure to lead a quiet life, he has too much adrenaline in him. However the thought of him actually settling down queitly is promising, something he had never done before, and to quote (paraphrased) "You know me Hermione, I like a nice quiet life"

^_^ Good job,
James_Padfoot

Hey I can't believe English isn't your first language! It was great! I'm not too keen on a Hermione/Harry pairing but it was still funny as!

I didn't see any blatant errors while reading this, then again, I was to busy laughing my head off! This story is hallarious!!