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Reviews For: The Green Fog
qt4good 2008-04-21 . chapter 1
Great work! I enjoyed reading it!

And for English not being your first language-- you did a great job! I've seen stories by people who have English as their only language and their grammer, punctuation, etc is horrible to the point of not being able to read the story!
guess 2007-11-24 . chapter 1
Crookshanks has nasty cat farts?
Lampessa 2007-11-12 . chapter 1
That was a great story. A really good laugh.
bjon66 2006-06-17 . chapter 1
lol, killer story...lol...
Praporshchik 2006-05-05 . chapter 1
Nice read. Liked the book title, very JK-ish.
EyeOfDlareme 2006-05-05 . chapter 1
LOL! Very funny, especially the "Sweet Merlin's toecheese!" remark.
Angelfly06 2006-05-04 . chapter 1
lmao!! This was really funny! I'm glad to see you trying something new. Again keep writing please!
James-Padfoot 2006-05-04 . chapter 1
*sniggles* Nice little piece. No offence, but somehow before even reading your story, by your ID name I had an inclination that you were a H/Hr shipper. Not one myself, however I find this piece refreshing, and never oppose pairings as long as the writing is good. And if you say English isn't your first language, then bravo!

Personally, I think Harry has had too much of adventure to lead a quiet life, he has too much adrenaline in him. However the thought of him actually settling down queitly is promising, something he had never done before, and to quote (paraphrased) "You know me Hermione, I like a nice quiet life"

^_^ Good job,
James_Padfoot
sheikgoddess 2006-05-04 . chapter 1
Hey I can't believe English isn't your first language! It was great! I'm not too keen on a Hermione/Harry pairing but it was still funny as!
Chibi-Penguin-Chan 2006-05-03 . chapter 1
I didn't see any blatant errors while reading this, then again, I was to busy laughing my head off! This story is hallarious!!
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