I really loved this little piece. One shots are really great. I thought Dnny's reaction was spot on, you really made me feel for the chars here. It was a really great piece.

it was really good

Loved it! Beautiful. :)

OMG! i loved it. so sweet and believable...if only the writers would take some of your advice :) although...it looked like they are slipping a little D/L shippage into the show...one can only hope:) keep the stories coming

There are no words to describe how much I loved this! This is only your first NY fic?! You've been holding out on us! This was not just a sweet story, it was so well-written. I loved this:
"She’d heard the rumours of course; tampered with evidence; was fired; no longer capable of doing an unbiased job; not cut out for it. But then again, she’d caught the rumours going around about her; country bumpkin; could herd cattle with her eyes shut; chewed at straw; had worked in a lab where the most up to date piece of equipment was a computer with Windows 95 on it."
Brilliant concept, fabulous fic. It's going on my list of Favorites!

Cute...

~wolfy~

Most Fanfiction can be absurd and improper; but you did an incredible job of keeping the language clean and making the characters realistic; their voice is very distinct - i can hear Danny's accent and Lindsey lisp in the back of her mouth. Their personalitlies match perfectly with the shows, you didn't make them to eager to plunge into a relationship; and the uneasiness that Lindsey feels concerning her being a replacement - fantastic!

i rate it a fivee star.

P.S. you might want to doulbe check for spelling errors before submission.

Ohh! I loved it! Very well written - It was like I was on an emotional rollercoaster just like them! Yay, those types of stories are always the best!

Great job! Keep posting!

OMG CAN U SAY LOVE IT! please tell me the spioler part was the kiss! i'm a huge danny and lindsy fan! please tell me that the spioler was the kiss!

I loved it. I must admit that I have only really seen 2 shows with Aiden in it so I really don't know anything about her/Danny but I love how you have D/L end up together in the end. Please post more D/L stories soon.

Brandy

"I will help to turn your city into my cornfield."

What a beautiful line in such a beautiful story!

This is moving and so in character.

Wow. You seriously need to write a lot more.

Wow! I'm a new D/L shipper and this was great!
I hope there's a DL moment for real in the 5/10 episode-it certainly can't top this! Thanks!

This was your first story? Trust me, you can't tell. It was well written, well thought out, and just great. I am so glad that you posted it. Don't hesitate to post more. You have a gift and courage. I read these things all the time, but no guts to post one. You did good :) Thanks for posting it. Keep up the awesome work.

it's fics like this that remind me why i am a d/l shipper. wonderful... absolutely wonderful!

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