that was beautiful. i have to admit though it was depressing in a way and you made the hole concept of death frightening, but it was perfect non the less.

I quite liked the Pettigrew part.

LD. x

It's an incredible idea, and you wrote it beautifully. There was a certain feel to it, unique, and yet perfect for this.

I must say, it's a very unique idea for a story, but that doesn't mean it's not good. It is in fact, really good and nicely written.

Wow, that was so intense - I feel like I'm there with him.

nice... it reminds me of "5 people you meet in heaven" a really great book

Crap, that's good. I cried through almost all of it. that was beautiful. I love your image of Heaven.

That was bloody amazing.

Shadow

i really liked your story! i think that you characterized everyone really well, especially sirius. great job!

Aww ... This is amazing.

The Power of Description - I love all of it, and basically, I have nothing to criticise ...

*cries cos she can't write this well*

Cuba

two dead men in a dead place

very powerful. this whole oneshot was rather powerful in itself, and quite morbid.

consider your mission complete.

That was great!

Beautiful. It was oddly peaceful and haunting at the same time. It really just made me stop and think. Absolutely wonderful. --Summer

eerie...so damn eerie! you're giving me the chills, the way heaven was portrayed was--beautiful. you're an awesome writer, and it always makes me so sad to think about the marauders after death!

kudos

~DogStar'n'LionHeart~

WOW! This is amazing. Reaslly really great. Such beautiful description and such lovely images. And the atmosphere is perfecta nd sort of half floaty falling vaguaness with sharp patches of emotion.

Very very well written, the characters are wonderful.

Very nice creation of a sense of place and time. Especially time- real sense of it just standing still and stretching on without notice. Very good use of the Dylan Thomas quotes. Beautiful language and excellent word choice.