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Miss Hal Gibson
2009-10-08 . chapter 6
This is a really good story. :D Since your obviously not going to be updating here..I shall hunt for your lj. *goes on mission*
DemonCentaur
2009-07-07 . chapter 6
Please Update soon!
This is a fantastic story and I wish to continue reading it!
I agree with him.
A lemon would be nice.
Again, please update it soon!
freak-joy-spastic
2009-04-25 . chapter 5
Yes that made almost no sence at all, and there was a bit too much saliva for my tastes but over all it did have a nice erotic twing to it. So, please update soon! and, a lemon whould be definitly nice. I'll give you a new review then. Good luck and much anime love ~bye bye~
freak-joy-spastic
2009-04-25 . chapter 3
armpit licking... ok... (the rest is getting cuter at least)
ThisIsHowTheBeatDrops
2008-05-16 . chapter 6
What happened to the story not being dead huh?You haven't updated in over a year an' I wanna know what happens next.
KittyBlue
2008-03-06 . chapter 6
i never thought about reading anyything with the zero's but the summary caught my attention.
i really really hope you continue this! it's so sweet!
i can't wait to read more about their experiences and discoveries! :)
Fanderichie
2007-08-06 . chapter 6
I really like this story, you know that xD
I visit everyday your LJ account to see if you have put it there xD
I don't want to press you or anything, just to know if you're going to update it.
You're very good at writing!

Lots of love,
Fanderichie.
pikapika-angelic-demon-17
2007-06-20 . chapter 6
looking forward to the new chapter!
MelloxChocolate
2007-06-14 . chapter 6
Since I did read the review of PoisonAndCinderella I was wondering if there WAS a chapter 6 here before? Because I really liked that line and would love to read that chapter! Please tell me where I can find this chapter and the upcoming ones, I visited your journal but I can't find the story there :(
Grendolen
2007-06-06 . chapter 6
Oh dear. :o This is becoming quite interesting.

Come on, keep writing. D:
Eris Mackenzie
2007-06-03 . chapter 5
...*stare*...*wipes drool* Yeah, usually I don't review for a story more than once, but...YEAH. That was the best dream I've ever read. Seriously. I want to have that dream. >,
Eris Mackenzie
2007-06-03 . chapter 4
NO! NO hate! I LOVED IT! Jeez, you make everyone else seem BLEH. I really heart your descriptions. Makes it feel like you're there in the bath with 'em. ;] Nice image, ne? Hehe.
Eris Mackenzie
2007-06-03 . chapter 3
*BIG GRIN* You know...I really, really liked that chapter. You did a great job. It was quite unlike anything I've ever read - and I applaud you on writing about the oh-so-awkward stage of puberty (I myself am in the middle of writing SoubixRitsuka WHILE Ritsuka is still 12...kinda squirmy because of the details, but I will do it! T0T) Once again, lovely writing.

P.S. I didn't know that about absinthe! >~
C4NDYP4NTS
2007-05-22 . chapter 5
Hey, in your last chapter, the last two sentences of it were: "I've been dreaming of kissing you."

Natsuo brought his arms up to clutch at his fresh shirt and said nothing more.

You said that either of the boys could have said this, but since you said "Natsuo...said nothing more," it implies that he was the one who said he's been dreaming of kissing Youji, since he didn't say anything MORE after that.
:P
Don'tKillKenny
2007-04-09 . chapter 6
Aw! Poor Zero!
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