 Delka 2006-06-05 . chapter 25Love the ending chapter. Glad I read it (all the chapters). Thanks. |
 panddora 2006-06-05 . chapter 25That was such a great ending : )!! Not hurried like many i've read, so well done!
Pandi |
 Tinuviel Undomiel 2006-06-05 . chapter 25I WANT THAT RING! Gosh that was such a beautiful ring, I'm gonna steal it from John. LOL so good, so sad it's over but it ended so well. |
 Titan5 2006-06-05 . chapter 25That was so cool! Love the ending. If you get a hankering to do a sequel, you could do the wedding. Ah, I love a happy ending! |
 snow6835 2006-06-05 . chapter 25that was awesome! please tell me you're gonna write a fic for their wedding! or better yet, their wedding plus caldwell's reaction when he finds out he can't butt in anymore! =) |
 Tinuviel Undomiel 2006-06-04 . chapter 24I thought it was a very good chapter, I love the guy's bonding. I believe you should seriously consider winding this story down. You don't want to kill it before it's over. You should end the story before people lose interest. Otherwise, I love it, Update soon. |
 Tinuviel Undomiel 2006-05-30 . chapter 23Oh I think this chapter was perfect, update soon. |
 TheNaggingCube 2006-05-30 . chapter 23I agree you captured Sam pretty well but you've got Cameron and Daniel even better. Well done. |
 TheNaggingCube 2006-05-28 . chapter 22technically *HEHEHEHHE*
Oh dear girl time and boy time... some how I don't think they will be getting the rest that the General told them too. |
 AkimaDoll 2006-05-27 . chapter 22and the plot thickens...! |
 Trialia 2006-05-26 . chapter 18*major eyeroll* First off, civilians can't be court-martialled. Secondly, you have both Chaya and Caldwell so far out of character it's not even funny. |
 panddora 2006-05-26 . chapter 22O! SO GOOD! Don't go!! please update soon! |
 Tinuviel Undomiel 2006-05-26 . chapter 22Oh so good, I liked it. Update again soon. |
 TheNaggingCube 2006-05-23 . chapter 21I'm enjoying the ride. The kissing and i love you moments made me think a bit of the bit in The Princess Bride where the 10 most romantic kisses ever were discussed. |
 AkimaDoll 2006-05-22 . chapter 21whe!! John and 'Liz are so cute! |