Wooooo! this was good! and it had me long in that you should've continued this one because I feel like you'd do good job with it until the manga's end.

Very nice! You did a really fantastic job of capturing Roy's personality. I like how you split it up from certain points leading up to Bradley's re-assignments! Quite good.

I love it so much. You characterised Roy perfectly. damn, that was good. definitely one of my favs.

I absolutely love this vignette style of writing; it really lets everything build up wonderfully until the end, which was, of course, lovely with all that developed angst. :) Loved this, as usual (probably my second favorite fic of yours, after "Checkmate").

This is so beautifully written and compiled, and shows how much Roy loves/wants/needs Riza. There is no way on earth such love is one sided, no way whatsoever.

Great! I'm not really one to read 'slices' actually, but well, you got me *hearts*

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Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful, and I love the way you portrayed just how she is his weak spot.

Man, the last two lines of this fic are so powerful. I love how you went to great lengths to describe her as his weakness, which built up everything until the final two lines of Bradley discovering it and using it against him.

Simply splendid.

This was amazing. A very good portrayal of what Roy feels about Riza. I loved it so much, really excellent writing! :)

Brutality brings out realizations in the harshest way.

Aww... no happy ending... still good though... and makes me want to hug Roy, then hit him over the head and tell him to confess to Riza already.

But then I always want to do that.

Meep!

I loved all the little snippets in this-but that last little section was the most powerful.

"Now all he has to do is twist the knife".

Amazing. Loved it!

Is there a sequel? There has to be- this story is way too good to end :D

"After all, it is instinctive to protect your weak spot."

we! luv that part! XP really gud! keep it up!