h-o-t.

and you're a ** if you're going to leave that as a one shot *glares*. a perfect reason for a multi-chaptered-piece-of-glorious-sexual-tension-riddled-yaoi-fanfiction!

and now that i'm done with my dashes and run-on sentences, please update! *glomps*

great job!

now i'm not exactly a fan of slash, much less of danny/dash slash
but this was fracking great and funny, i loved it XD
-skitzo

I like it. It's very good proof that turnabout is very fair play. Also very dirty.

*low whistle*
That was hard core. This fic filled me to the brim with glee. XD
"That was for me," = WIN. Angry smut is always good. I could totally see Danny smirking or something at that last line. Man, that was awsome!

damn that was good love it!

this is realy good. really good. keep writing this one!

*drools* this made me happy Shinji very happy Shinji

Hey;
Great story. Think you could make it into a chaptered story?

And on a completely unrelated note, my dog just sneezed at me.

Merry Christmas!

wow...this was AWESOME! so incredibly hott!!
hm...doesnt seem like theres gonna be more (which is a total tragedy) but i love what ya got! its just...amazing. i'm in awe...i think i'll have to check out some of ur other fics! :D

...nice ending... loved it! Very good fic!

~Squirrel~

*grins* awesome-ness!

*groans incoherently*

:O I quite liked that! Besides a few grammatical errors, I really liked that.

"Watch it!" the other boy hissed. "They're still out there"

That should have a period at the end of "They're still out there." There were a few other things like that, but besides that, it was GREAT. ;)

OH my friggin' GAWD.

That was one of the best slash fanfics I've ever read. You need to write more on this... okay, I need you to write a second chapter.

PLEASE!? *puppy dog eyes*

DANNY! Hahaha! YOu little **!

Awesome job. You made Danny the kind of...hmm...Uke-on -top. ^_^;;

Keep it up!