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| meow 2008-09-11 ch 4, anon. | abuseI love Naruto's "ruffian" accent. But I think I might of like the caterpillar part the best. Duo: NU~!*sobs* *virtue is stolen* Caterpillar:*pedobeargrin*Heheheheh Butterflys: WHY DUO? WHY~ |
| sympatheticassassin 2008-08-07 ch 4, | abuseNicely written story. I don't think Iruka would scare the Gundam pilots though after what they have been through regardless of his teaching experience. I also don't think the boys would quietly accept being assimilated into a waring state after fighting so long for peace. Didn't Heero state that he didn't want to kill again after Endless Waltz? |
| Hikari Kaiya 2008-07-20 ch 4, | abuseThis is a really good story so far and I can't wait until the next chappie! Keep up the good work! I also think the the GW boys are probably gonna later on see Naruto as a little brother, especially Duo and Quarte. |
| Nukenin 2008-07-08 ch 4, | abuseJust a suggestion... Duo knows the Hiraishin, even if he's not capable of pulling it off. What wouldn't Orochimaru do if he found that out? |
| elliott ian eckstrom 2008-06-15 ch 3, anon. | abuselike your veiws personaly i think there are many deities, but we f**ked up their religions so much that they dont want anything to do whith us. at all. exelent plot, personalities, & dialog btw. |
| Shinigami-chan 2008-06-13 ch 4, | abuseAWESOME STORY! I ABSOLUTLY LOVE THIS, I JUST WISH THAT YOU WOULD UPDATE SOON! sorry, but i just really love this story. |
| Hikaru H.K 2008-04-30 ch 4, | abusethe story is quite good, please update soon ne? |
| SelenaWolf 2008-04-25 ch 4, | abuseOh man, this is great! I was nearly laughing out loud in parts, and that's not good when your parents are asleep just two doors over! Anyways, please don't abandon this story, it's great! One question though - How old's Naruto in this? |
| Steven Kodaly 2008-04-23 ch 4, | abuse*Begins vouching furiously* So, if Sarutobi is still alive, and assuming that you are paying at least lip service to Naruto canon, then Team Kakashi will be up for the Chuunin Examinations within a few months, in-story. With Team Iruka on the scene, I suspect that things will get, ah, 'interesting' for anyone else crashing the party, such as Orochimaru. |
| kirallie 2008-04-19 ch 4, | abuseYay! Yay! Yay! You updated!! Love this story! Like that you have Iruka so strong. Pity he ran into Gai before Kakashi, that would have been good. WIll the boys ever get home or are they stuck? Keep up the excellent work! Will they find out Naruto's secret? Can't see them shunning him for it, if anything I can see them standing up for him. |
| kyothefallenkit 2007-10-19 ch 3, | abuseAww no more!! Please please please update soon!! X3 love it so far!XD |
| suu 2007-05-09 ch 3, anon. | abusemore! more! more! more! more please! Iruka is the best! |
| Kat 2006-12-06 ch 3, anon. | abusemore, more, More,MOre,MORe, MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE! Oh, did I mention, more, PLEASE?! The only cc I can offer is use a spell check hun, you mispelled a lot and it does make the story a lil harder to read sometimes. Otherwise, I love the whole concept. ^_^ |
| Angel T-chan Nekoi 2006-12-02 ch 3, | abuseHey, very nice story!! The guys can be very interesting ninjas if I can say... What kind of pranks yer think Duo and Naruto can do tagether? ^^ rsrsrsrs... please, update right when you could, I can't wait fer the new chap! T-xan "It's easy to leave the world the way it is, difficult is to turn the world into what it was supposed to be." |
| kirallie 2006-09-27 ch 3, | abuseYay! An update! I love that Iruka isn't a pushover!! The reactions to his killing intent were priceless!! SO why is Iruka still chuunin iof he's that powerful? Keep up the great work! Like how Quatre instantly moved to comfort Duo and the others went all protective!! By the way, what is Wikipedia? Really hope there's more soon! |