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sodapop765 2007-10-18 . chapter 1
Hey, great fic. Listen, can i use your idea in my fic Product of a Betrayl
Jenaneter 2006-12-10 . chapter 1
It's certainly nice to see a story about Peter that shows that the other Muraders were actually friends with him, instead of just putting up with him tagging along. You did a wonderful job showing why he went over to Voldemort's side. Very good job.
It's Molly 2006-12-03 . chapter 1
Hatty.
You're amazing.
I want your writing skills. ;-;
I absolutely loved this.
mimbulus-mimbletonia 2006-09-29 . chapter 1
im not usually a peter sympathiser but oh noes! poor peter thats s sad. wonderfully written x
TheEdithFactory 2006-08-03 . chapter 1
Oh. My. God. Do you have ANY idea how talented you are? This story is totally and completely amazing. I adore it. I love how you took a different approach to Peter- I agree that it sucks when people make out that Peter was just this malicious tag-along who all the rest of the marauders hated, because it is so blatantly untrue.

I just had to tell you how amazing this story is! You are going on like, every favourites list I own.

xxAikoTEFxx

P.S. was what you wrote in your profile about Emma Watson and the auditions true?? Because if it is, I may just have to send you chocolates. Or money. Or pretty much anything you want.
bRaTsKi 2006-06-16 . chapter 1
damn
that was deep

it showed a different view
i like it
Illusional Facade 2006-05-18 . chapter 1
owh, that was so lovely. i love your fics. i've nvr read one from peter's POV, and i have been slightly against him, but you made me see that he didn't MEAN to kiil Lily & James. Gosh. Poor Peter.

Luvs,

-me. xx
eeveekitty85 2006-05-15 . chapter 1
That was very, very good! I don't read much Harry Potter and I certainly haven't read anything from Peter's POV before, but I'm thinking now that I really ought to...There was a lot of emotion in this and the...hm...forgotten the technical term...train of thought? Well, it was very good. Like being in Peter's head...and these lines just made me shiver: ‘I never ment to kill your parents.’ I only meant to kill you, Harry.

A very enjoyable fic.
OtherwiseKnownAsOli 2006-05-13 . chapter 1
oh poor peter!
I absolutely love your stories!
~oli
sequinedfasade 2006-05-04 . chapter 1
I really liked that, hearing Wormtail's point of view. This is really good, apart from a few typos...but that happens to all of us! Great job on this, bud. You should write more from Peter's perspective; I think you're very good at it!
Mighty Lord Moldy-Shorts 2006-05-04 . chapter 1
Oh that was REALLY good! :)
tongzoen 2006-05-04 . chapter 1
Sniff.
Hatty.
That was amazing.
I loved it.
YOURPETER OWNSALL.
but you knew that.
And I cant stop sniffing. But thats because I have a runny nose.

The fic was love.
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