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dddynamite
2006-08-21
ch 1,
abuseAw I loved it you should write more!
Christina Dimgwrthien
2006-07-05
ch 1,
abuseAww. I've never been a big Danny/Lindsay shipper, but I think that's converted me to their fanfiction.

I like your use of two different points of view to get the meaning across. It wouldn't have been so effective with only one - it would have seemed too unrequited. With them both, it sounds like real love.

Danny's hoping it was a date is so sweet, as well as his view of Subway Girl (as I like to call her).

Very smooth style, like a real romance story. Good job!
CalleighRox
2006-06-25
ch 1,
abuseaw, soo cute, lol, i liked that :D,
I'd read your other stories too, but i dont watch the west wing and so wouldn't be able to follow it all i knwo is that Emily Proctor is in it Occasionally, and i totally dont get starwars :S lol except Jaja is soo funny :D lol, episode 1 i must have seen 5times, lol, but not the others, its always on tv lol,
but yah, great NY fic :D :D thanx,
luv
CalleighRox
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an1
2006-05-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseNice job. Really liked it.
JacobedRose
2006-05-04
ch 1,
abuseVery well done, I love all the references and inferences.
JennCorinthos
2006-05-04
ch 1,
abuseAwe I loved this... Danny likes Montana... (You know I dont know her name I also refer her as Montana)...

JENNIFER
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