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| dddynamite 2006-08-21 ch 1, | abuseAw I loved it you should write more! |
| Christina Dimgwrthien 2006-07-05 ch 1, | abuseAww. I've never been a big Danny/Lindsay shipper, but I think that's converted me to their fanfiction. I like your use of two different points of view to get the meaning across. It wouldn't have been so effective with only one - it would have seemed too unrequited. With them both, it sounds like real love. Danny's hoping it was a date is so sweet, as well as his view of Subway Girl (as I like to call her). Very smooth style, like a real romance story. Good job! |
| CalleighRox 2006-06-25 ch 1, | abuseaw, soo cute, lol, i liked that :D, I'd read your other stories too, but i dont watch the west wing and so wouldn't be able to follow it all i knwo is that Emily Proctor is in it Occasionally, and i totally dont get starwars :S lol except Jaja is soo funny :D lol, episode 1 i must have seen 5times, lol, but not the others, its always on tv lol, but yah, great NY fic :D :D thanx, luv CalleighRox x |
| an1 2006-05-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice job. Really liked it. |
| JacobedRose 2006-05-04 ch 1, | abuseVery well done, I love all the references and inferences. |
| JennCorinthos 2006-05-04 ch 1, | abuseAwe I loved this... Danny likes Montana... (You know I dont know her name I also refer her as Montana)... JENNIFER |