this chapter was grate i was crying of laghter the same goes for stranded wiht idiots ur storys are so funy i cant stop reading them. plese continue righting nuw ones caus there awsome... i got my mom reading stranded whith idiots she was roling on the flore laghing.and she dosent like naruto or any other anime but she absolutly LOVED ur storys.

ahahahahahahhaha
that was awesome!
ahahahahahaha
I can't believe it xD
That's so typical boys xD

crazie

Nah...it was funny I laughed alot, Shinno is wonderful character, he is really good to make a parody on, and also Neji...great work! my respects to you

u should make a sequel

DANG! THAT WAS HILARIOUS!!

I totally forgive you for the OOC Shino...I mean...really?! How else is the poor guy going to lift his wings(bug wings) and soar? XD

Well, I LOVE THE ENDING!!

Man...I feel like a loser now. I'm ONLY 15 and this story made want to play this game...well, my friends and I could always use Soda or water...and see who get's the hyper-est? XD

I guess I'll just have to wait til I'm older...although I promised myself I would never drink alcohol...so this sucks...

Anyway...I LOVE YOUR STORY!! FUNNY!! It's a different kind of funny from other stories I've read...I don't know what the word is...maybe a sophisticated kind of funny? Idk...but I LIKE IT!

Keep writing!!

Kawaii-llely-chan

I swear I reviewed and put this in my favourites a long time ago...-_-

Haha, awesome game. Yes, it DOES make me want to play...but I'm so unfortunately underage. Garg.

Awesome. Yes, some guys were OOC, but oh well. It was well written and funny.

Wow, I totally loved this story it was hilarious and yeah it really does make you want to play ^^

AWW YEAH! Please update soon!

hehe.I wonder how it would be for the guys to play with the girls kiku no hana,kiku no hana!!good job!


~~lilchibihina

yeah, it's okay... although it's not as OOC as your other stuff... just my opinion: maybe you should've quoted what the guys were saying which were out of topic??

that's all.

i can't PM you... i'm on yahoo, not hotmai... ToT

love it. u should add more 2 it. if u do i will be the first 2 read it.

LOL I had a good time reading it!
Heck, I really like OOCness... heehee... I can't avoid that!

Anyway, nice work!
^_^
See ya around?

hahahahha. thats funny. it did make me want to play, aside from the fact that I dont like alcohol. but still, it was good.

OMFG ROFL HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD!