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| RngrThorne 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abuseReally hoping you do more with this one. |
| tdk99992000 2006-09-03 ch 1, | abusegreat stuff |
| Luren 2006-05-06 ch 1, | abuseHey this isn't an Exile story! What is going on in that burgundy-haired head of yours? Not that I can really complain. This is looking to be interesting, very interesting actually. The idea on Dawn being a slice of the Force is intriguing. I of course like just about everything of yours that I have read and will follow you to any galaxy far, far away. So do write on and thanks for sharing your words. |
| Gloriana the Younger 2006-05-05 ch 1, | abuseI've never seen anything like this before. The idea of Dawn being part of the force is an interesting one and I have no idea about where you're going to take it. The unpredictability element makes for an excellent read. Try and continue on. |
| katie 2006-05-05 ch 1, anon. | abuselove it |
| Bobboky 2006-05-05 ch 1, | abusecool |
| Sean Malloy-1 2006-05-05 ch 1, | abuseCan't wait for more, please do your best to update this story as soon as you're able to and keep up the good work |
| fanfictionfan 2006-05-05 ch 1, anon. | abusevery interesting start for story.will dawn pairing some jedi??i cant wait what will happen next.post soon please |
| rankokunalpha1 2006-05-05 ch 1, | abusedamn this is entertaining. but i wonder what dawn qill do as she is now part of the force? i hope it does continue this story that is i cant wait for more as what you have wrote is excellent! |
| screaminheathen69 2006-05-04 ch 1, | abuseO, the possibilities! Continue this story you will, hm? |
| Leo 2006-05-04 ch 1, anon. | abusePlease please please update soon! This story has me hooked! Besides, I really can't wait to read the actual crossover part. Which timeline for Star Wars will it be anyway? |
| Nita 2006-05-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story good premise. very unique. Usually it's buffy or Xander that things like this happen to. The Key once a part of the Force is truly inspired. I understand that you have other stories to attend to as well as RL but not not continue this to see where it leads would be criminal. |
| TardisAngel21 2006-05-04 ch 1, | abuseI like it!! Good start, can't wait to see where you go from here. |
| Lask 2006-05-04 ch 1, | abuseYou may concider this review 20, seeing as I liked it. Now to round up the other 19... |