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Reviews For: The Beginning

RngrThorne
2008-07-26
ch 1,
abuseReally hoping you do more with this one.
tdk99992000
2006-09-03
ch 1,
abusegreat stuff
Luren
2006-05-06
ch 1,
abuseHey this isn't an Exile story! What is going on in that burgundy-haired head of yours? Not that I can really complain. This is looking to be interesting, very interesting actually. The idea on Dawn being a slice of the Force is intriguing. I of course like just about everything of yours that I have read and will follow you to any galaxy far, far away. So do write on and thanks for sharing your words.
Gloriana the Younger
2006-05-05
ch 1,
abuseI've never seen anything like this before. The idea of Dawn being part of the force is an interesting one and I have no idea about where you're going to take it. The unpredictability element makes for an excellent read. Try and continue on.
katie
2006-05-05
ch 1, anon.
abuselove it
Bobboky
2006-05-05
ch 1,
abusecool
Sean Malloy-1
2006-05-05
ch 1,
abuseCan't wait for more, please do your best to update this story as soon as you're able to and keep up the good work
fanfictionfan
2006-05-05
ch 1, anon.
abusevery interesting start for story.will dawn pairing some jedi??i cant wait what will happen next.post soon please
rankokunalpha1
2006-05-05
ch 1,
abusedamn this is entertaining. but i wonder what dawn qill do as she is now part of the force? i hope it does continue this story that is i cant wait for more as what you have wrote is excellent!
screaminheathen69
2006-05-04
ch 1,
abuseO, the possibilities! Continue this story you will, hm?
Leo
2006-05-04
ch 1, anon.
abusePlease please please update soon! This story has me hooked! Besides, I really can't wait to read the actual crossover part. Which timeline for Star Wars will it be anyway?
Nita
2006-05-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseGreat story good premise. very unique. Usually it's buffy or Xander that things like this happen to. The Key once a part of the Force is truly inspired. I understand that you have other stories to attend to as well as RL but not not continue this to see where it leads would be criminal.
TardisAngel21
2006-05-04
ch 1,
abuseI like it!! Good start, can't wait to see where you go from here.
Lask
2006-05-04
ch 1,
abuseYou may concider this review 20, seeing as I liked it. Now to round up the other 19...
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