*dies of laughter*
That was so totally random and pointless it was FUNNY!
OMG!
I wish I got that idea!
I would have SO MUCH FUN making it XD

:O This is suposed to be serious?

'cause I was laughting after the firs three lines.

I can't believe that it actually fitted (it seems impossible to do that pairing)

i love it anyways!

ªDani-chanª

um, scared, so very scared.

good story though

Omg this is hilarious!

Perverted humour seems very fit for this fanfic ^-^ i just can't imagine that sasuke will do it with his brother.. and didn't kill him

i laughed my butt off this is my first yaoi and incest you are right this is a serious but funny story and weirdist story i ever read but sickingly amusing lol

It was utterly delicious crack. One won't deny certain out of character actions, but thats what happens in humor crack fics anyways, so its of little importance.

The writing was well done and there was a good deal of description, both about feelings, passing events, and some history as well.

The humor was golden and the plotline and events were certainly something you wouldn't see from many authors (or rather, -done well- from many authors).

The mood also seemed consistant enough for the story to not take any abrupt or jerky turns, which is always a plus. I like how it ended as well, giving it a complete feel (or as complete as a one shot can be in my experience)

So, in closing: silly, but enjoyable :D

-Applauds- That was kinda...digusting to picture, but it was still hilarious. xD I'm just not into lemon fics, or implied ones, but I still loved it. =DD I was smiling the whole way! ♥

Hyper Neji is one of the ... umm ... scary/weird/cool thing in the universe.

Now that was an unexpected 'pairing' ... yeah, we'll go with pairing :)

good job :)