mm,it's true that your prologue isn't necessary..but it was VERY well written . It almost felt like I was reading a real book^^ First chapter was good too,you've got the characters' personalities shown well and the dialogue flows nicely.I'm adding this story to my Alert list,so I'll hope you'll update soon!

-Chachamaru

Aw! You should continue this!! It was the ONE interesting story that made sense and actually sounded in-character, unlike the rest of the stories I've gotten a glimpse of. It's really good compared to some of that other Detective Conan junk!! It really is.

You know, this story has potential, but the first chapter was really off-setting, not very useful and barely kept my interest up. Perhaps you could get rid of the prolouge and put the first chapter there instead? :)

Otherwise, I liked it. Summary caught my attention right away, the characters were suitably written (although I personally think Conan would be a bit less...on equal footing? When speaking to them, but that's probably just me), the storyline seems interesting, and...well, I could go on, but I'll just leave it at this: I almost never read fanfics with only two chapters, and certainly not one that didn't have any reviews (to much bad fanfic out there...;)).

If I came off as pretentious or sarcastic, I really didn't mean to. Expect to see me next chapter! :)