awesome! keep going, i can't stop wondering what his new powers will be. also, try checking out my story!

reviews + helpful ideas = more chapters!

Please keep going. Don't stop.

SQE! That was so cute! Please keep going.

omg nice cliff hanger lol i hate u now other than that amazing story so far godd JOB!!

GAH! you are soo annoying you know?! its been over a YEAR since you've updated this story! please at least finish it.

Oh, great. A cliffhanger right as you get to the main story. Anyways, you've done a great job with this story. The characters are extremely well writen bringing the readers to fall in love with them. Many times OC's are not felt as if they are part of the story, or the setting but you did a great job making it seem as if they were one of the original characters. Also, you have made the story seem very believable. The characters act like they do in the actual manga. For instance, having the visual cue of Hinata, helping Naruto out of they Kyuubi stage, is something that would actually occur, just like how Sakura helped Sasuke in the forest of death. Kudos, and I hope you don't wait too much longer to update again. It has already been 5 months. Can't wait to read more!

You have an amazing story going on here. I even read your profile for your upcoming sequels to this story. It's amazing that you can think that far ahead. You are an amazing author and have an amazing imagination. You're great at cliff hangers, too. Heh. I have enjoyed this story much and one day hope to read till the end. (but until then I can wait)

I can completely understand your lack of updates because I do it myself. Writing something like this is hard especially if it's your first time writing stuff like this. (Can't say it's your first, but if it is, you're sure good at it.)

Good luck with all your stories present and future ones. =^^=. (Heh, you're story has also inspired me to write more of mine.)

Sorry for the overly long comment. =>.>=.

such an awesome and well written story! The evil cliffhanger you have at the end of this chapter, it took me completely by surprise. But what I found to be more surprising is that you have left this cliffhanger over our heads for over a year now... Please tell me you haven't abandoned the story! I want to find out this enormous plot twist of yours!

I like fluff...fluffy is fluffy, maube it's just cuz i'm a romantic guys or the lack of relationships i've had in my 13 year long life (1 and counting...eheh..at least it was for a year, would've been longer too, till i had to move)ANYWAYS...i was getting off point...great story so far i've only read two ch. and i already like it.
NARUHINA FTW

this was interesting and was wonderin was this mew power his true strength or unlockin a bloodline oh and when will you be updating

update soon its the biggest cliffhanger ive ever seen

loved this story no ya busy with ya others fanfiction and work will there be any updates in the future

GAH!

WHY DON'T YOU UPDATE THIS WONDERFUL STORY?! YOU CAN'T POSSIBLY BE THAT BUSY TO UPDATE FOR AN ENTIRE YEAR!

Grr, you stopped just as it was getting good. Iruka dead? That's very sad. Shizune is there, maybe he'll hang on for a little while longer. Hope you update soon.

I... I can't believe you stopped updating after ending this chapter THERE! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! UPDATE SOON! This story is absolutely amazing and I would love to know how it finishes.