hey ! :D

GREAT STORY AND CHAP! :D

i cant wait!

i hope you can update soon! X3

Before I say anything first, what was the Naruto's "power". Maybe you wrote it and I missed it. Anyhow, here is the real review. If I seem too harsh then by all means ignore me, but how will you improve otherwise?

The Good: Pretty good characterisation, the fighting scenes were pretty good (at least to me, but I don't pay good attention to them) and your story seems to flow pretty smoothly. Keep this up.

The Bad:

Why can't some authors resist the urge to pair off every single character. It doesn't do squat for your story except for taking up space of people having relationship that has no impact on the story what so ever. It will only clog up your story and then put in some pairings if it makes sense and has a purpose in the story (it may seem hard but all I am saying is that there should be a reason why you pair of so many people). Am I saying that it is wrong for characters to be in a relationship? Not at all, but it should be explained well and be reasonably executed and be of some importance to the story. I don't know how to make myself more cleasr. I would love to write more but the review window keeps ** up so I guess this is all you'll get from me.

This story is awesome, but it seems like you abandoned it, I don't think it takes more then 2 years for a writers block.

So 2 years 2 months and counting is soon, eh? Well, I'll just have to wait and give my review /when/ you update the last chapter.

is this the end or is thee a part two ? do you plan on updating this fic or do you have writers block?

I'm In Love With The Story.No OOc-ness,No Unnecessary Tactics - To Put It Simply,No Cr*p.

It's A Perfect Story With Perfect Flow (Of Relationships Between Characterd),Perfect Drama...And Even More Of A Perfect-Enough Fluff.

The Awakening Of Naruto Had Chills Run Up My Spine.Emerald Green?Purity Of Naruto?I Guess I'll Just Have To Wait What You're Upto,Tyler.

Impressive Writing,Ti-The-Point,And Romance-Which-I-Just-Love To-Doe-For. <3

Update Soon!

NO! right at the good part to. UPDATE PLEASE?*cries* awesome though everything's just right.

NO! right at the good part to. UPDATE PLEASE?*cries* awesome though

You are a genius

Omg it's perfect the most cute fanfic I've read ever

Please Continue!

This was beautiful i really loved it how Naruto and Hinata's relationship got stronger

wat happened to "Also, I hate authors who decide they're too damn lazy to finish they're fics. I also started writing so we could have more completed fics. I hate all the unfinished stories, especially when they're really good. "?
now i kno ur most likely busy and most of us will forgive you if u at least let us kno that ur not fricking dead!
but i mean seriously it's been way to long since this story was updated.
ur writing is amazing and i absolutly can't wait for the next chapter!
good luck with ur writing.

AH! Such a cruel cliffhanger! man i really want to now what's happening... AH! i can't wait for the next chapter!
Keep it up! Buh bye for now!
LUV!

OMG I LUV THIS! i have already read all 13 chapters and i can't wait for the next one!! you are a complete genius! if i could i would glomp you this is pure awesomeness and it couldn't be better oh a neji... blind... luv it well i mean i'm sad for him but it's really a good idea
but man you and your story are so awesome!