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| -PunkRockChickk- 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abuseGood story, though I tend to like longer stories better |
| watchmebleed 2006-05-06 ch 1, | abuseAw, this is a wonderful story! You are very good at giving lots of detail and really helping us picture where he's at and what he's doing. I love the line about moving in his queen for the checkmate! =) I would love to find out what ended up happening so if the fancy strikes you to write a follow up, please do!! |