 Jen 2006-05-05 . chapter 1 Man, I love the way your write. I mean, there's less than 1,0 words here. So, relatively short as fic goes. But there's so much *here*. It's so rich with emotion and depth. You really do capture Robin and Patrick so very well.
"Sex with her was a walk in the park. Loving her, a plunge from a cliff."
God, that was fabulous. And "Mom"? Killed me.
The whole thing was just beautiful. |