I enjoyed this greatly! The humor was great along with the way you tied the two story lines together. LOVED IT!

Do a parody of one of these:

Heat
The Godfather
Dog Day Afternoon
Donnie Darko
Donnie Brasco
Scarface
Pulp Fiction - this would work the best, I think given the amount of characters.
The Matrix - second-best choice.

Okay, now that the suggestions are out of the way, time for the review!

I loved this story - every minute of it! Your writing was simple, but very VERY funny (I especially enjoyed all of Axel's lines. He had the best over all). You displayed a good, well-rounded use of all and any Kingdom Hearts characters you could think of, all while keeping it entertaining and following the plot of the original 'Wizard of Oz'. For this, I commend you. I can't wait to see what you do next...just know, I'm looking forward to it!

Your friend, admirer and fellow fanfic author,
BaltoLuver63

Please, make a sequal about the Return to Oz, except this time have Selphie be Dorothy, because Kairi is awfully ** and doesn't want to have anything to do with Parodies.
Please, make the sequal about the Return to Oz, it's going to be so cool. This time, make Donald Duck be one of the main characters, because Dorothy has a Chicken with her this time. Not the dog. Make Donald Duck the chicken. Okay, and the wheelies can be the heartless. And Hades would make a nice evil Nome King. If I spelled Nome right. I never saw the Wizard of Oz, but I always saw the Return to Oz all the time.
Please make a sequal about that, please?

This is so funny, I just love it and...

Dorothy: This is just awful, oh this just awful, Kairi hang in there.

The Wicked Witch of the West: Hahahahahahahaha! I'm going to make sure that Malificent wins. There is no stopping me!

Dorothy: Not if I can help it! You leave Kairi alone now!
(Kairi pulls out two Keyblades this time. She pulls out the "Oblivion" Keyblade and the "Oathkeeper" Keyblade.)

The Wicked Witch of the West: Two?! Oh, **! How about some fire, pretty?!?!?!?
(Then everything goes up in flames, and she pulls out her broom. Then the two battle it out once and for all.)

This is so funny, I'm just loving it! Keep up the good work, this is the funniest Parody I ever read and...(Dorothy interupts)
Dorothy: Sora doesn't love Kairi, but loves Riku instead?!?! No!

This is so funny! I'm just loving it! Now for my suggestion for the tin man is this. Have a member from the Organization be the tin man, because Nobodies don't have hearts who want hearts to be whole again.

Dorothy: That's awful, poor Kairi...

Wicked Witch of the West: Hahahahahahahahahahaha! Suffer Kairi, suffer! Go to hell, go to hell!

Dorothy: You leave Kairi alone! (Dorothy swings the keyblade at the evil witch **)

Wicked Witch of the West: OW! Now you're in for it!

Dorothy: Shut up you old hag!

This is so good...I'm loving it!

Dorothy: How dare you make fun of our adventures.

Toto: Woof (Same here)!

Wicked Witch of the West: You better not have my sister get smashed by that @#$% house again. *&^% that house, I hope burns in flames!

Dorothy: That's my house your talking about!
(She pulls out the keyblade)

Wicked Witch of the West: Then come and get some my Pretty. This time I'm immune to water. I'm not melting this time.

(Dorothy and the Wicked Witch of the West battle it out!)

They made a sequel!? WOW. Anyway, how about you parody Aladdin or...Curse of the Black Pearl! That way, Riku or Sora and Kairi can get drunk off rum!LMFAO!
Sora, Riku, and Kairi: HEY!
Nic: Whoops. And away I go!(Runs off in a flash.) BTW, chapter twenty of my fic's up. Hope you get a chance to read it.

I can't wait to see which character is actually is the wizard!

lmao, this rocks!!Poor Axel and his costume XD XD Continue soon please.Your my hero!! ^_^

Hahaha! Liked this part:

'Kairi began pacing the room. “Hope those guys get here on time to get me out of this heap instead of going at each other’s throats! Holy crap, I have to keep my mind off of that stinking hour glass! Think something sexy! Think something sexy! Think something sexy! Oh, not working!”'

LOL!

Hahahhahahah!ok..heheh..ok i`m done.
That had to be the funnies fanfic i`v read all week! Keep it going!

*GO MOOGLES!*

Oh, wow. For how stupid the idea sounds, this has turned out to be a great fiction . . . I'd pay to see Axel get plopped on.

lmao

Nic: I wonder what a winged heartless monkey would look like.
Kairi: Probably a Powerwild mixed with an Air Pirate.
Nic: I can only imagine a Powerwild with wings. Also, chapter 13 of my story is up. Be sure to tell me if it's on your story alerts list.