o!
Awesome!
I love it!
it's so orginal, the way you are writing it.
i haven't seen many stories like this, and i love how each one holding a unique taste to it!
please, PLEASE update it soon! I want to read the next part! ^^

Zetsu

AWW!
That was so adorable!
KAWAII! ^/^
I love how Noodle and 2D's relationship is coming off.
So cute!
I can't stop smiling on the awesomeness!
You have an amazing talent for writing, and I'm sure it will only get better as I read on.
Keep up the good work!

Zetsu

Another great story!

Very descriptive and amazingly written.

Just thought I'd let you know - 2D's real name is Stuart Pot. Not Tusspot. That was his dad's name but he changed it just before 2D was born so he wouldn't get picked on like he did.

It's in the rise of the ogre :)

R x x

great story, please update soon, though I'm tempted to settele for at all. lol.

Great story! It is obviousthat you put alot of love and time into this story. A few things I would like to suggest though. It may be just me, but I am a fast reader, and it is hard to figure out some of the thins that they are saying. O! Noodle just HAS to get a BF! Mabe not in the next chapter, but it would be awsome. 2D mabe... is he to old for her, you think? Keep going. (You could sell stories for money one day ;))

Sorry you had to move so much. I know how it feels:(

OMG U NEED TO DO MORE!! it took me forever to read this cause i just found this with all 7 chapters and i didnt read how many word count there was. 90,0 HOLY CRAP I COULDNT TYPE THAT MUCH! x.x jeez u got a head full of ideas. u will become a good writer. well hope to see more of ur ideas later.

I have to say this story is just genius. It is almost like YOU created these characters. Only a couple of other authors I think...capture the personalities as convincing as you do, and then those stories are usually slathered in melo-drama love stories between characters. And this is a nice breather from all that.

AWESOME you updated! XD Really gettin' good! I liked the new chapter, twas very evtertaining! :]

I hope I didn't scare you with that PM...I tend to do that...scare people that is...I'm addicted to anger and raw emotion which would explain why my stories are damn twisted...but this isn't about me, anyway...there's nothing to say, every chapter is just...wow!

YAY! Another chapter! Can't wait to see the next one!

Magnifico! Great to see you back in the writing world of Please keep it up!

I had braces...it was hell when they took them off in the summer! It was even bigger hell when they were scraping the glue off my teeth! Makes me wish I could earthbend now...


Now I'm on retainer...I can relate to pain like dental health XP

Yeah I'm not going to lie to you this is one long chapter! Lol! I'm so used to reading books like Harry Potter and LOTR's it doesn't even matter anymore...but for this I skimmed it (I can speed read like a computer sometimes!) but basically it's how Noodle came to the picture...now on to chapter 2!

Hey you should update this! I really like it!

Is it 'ew? Or Noods?

Anyway, please update teh story.