Aw, that was kind of sweet... and kind of hot :)

Nice to see that someone takes care of Peter when the rest of the world doesn't give a **. If you ever feel like writing more on this I would be very happy... one can always hope.

OMG So sweet! And hot!! I loved the line 'Pete was made for cuddling -- like a big, spider-powered teddy bear' It made me laugh and I feel so cheerful right now!! Thanks!!

This story is amazing! I love Johnny/Peter pairings and there really aren't enough of them. Your's is truly one of the best.

Wow! really well-written! I love serious Johnny...and you made him great. Really.

*bows down before the incredibly awesome and wonderful authoress who wrote such a fantastic JohnnyxPeter fic* That is the longest *action* sentence I have ever written. (Btw, I meant every word of that incredibly long *action* sentence.) Thank you for writing this. The world needs more JohnnyxPeter.

This was wonderful. I enjoyed the way you described the affection Johnny felt for Peter, and how it mingled with the physical pleasure of the whole thing. Great story.

Sure you don't love him Johnny. (coughs) We believe you. (snickers)

Great introduction sentence most people's ends up being a conversation or something of the like. Please write more of this pairing! There isn't enough J/P love out there.

Hey, this is really good. In fact,this is one of the best stories I have seen. Even though they're doing things that some people think is kinky it just doesn't seem that way when you write it. A lot of people try to make sex scences like this and fail but you got it perfectly! I just get this feeling when I read this story that their relationship is complicated but doesn't need to be explained 'cause it's something you can't explain but you just get it.Know what I mean?

Hey!

I've read your stories in other places and, I must say, you are a wonderful writer.

Not only is your comprehension of the English language clearly demonstrated, it is seamlessly integrated in the spine-tingling, love-making between the two.

You really have a knack for using the right words and the right times to create an overall desired effect: the reader dazed, and horny.

Nice! =]

Absolutely beautiful! You mix up verb tenses here and there -- just little stuff, like where you say "Johnny's skin are hot" and it should be "*is* hot" -- but other than that, I love this! I admit, I wasn't looking for Peter/Johnny, but I'm so happy I found it~

You...own...my...soul...

yay! there's finally some more johnny/peter! thank you for writing this, it's a glorious piece to read. very cute. and sexy. so i commend you.