wish you'd finish.

You know, when I read it on your site, not once did I think of looking on . Anyway, it's a great fic. I just have a few problems with it. Harry's too gullible. he tends to take everything at face value and most of the time, he doesn't suspect treachery. Like when he talks to Scrimgeour, he believes almost everything he's told, he didn't even suspect that there were underlying subclauses. He also trusts his solicitor implicitely, you never know when a betrayal will develop. He also tends to act like a petulant child when he's angry. There was the instance with the goblin, with Scrimgeour, with Mcgonagall after visiting Hagrid, even the morning of the Wizengamot session when he refused to wear the family rings. I understand the angst, but it's just... I don't know how to say it. There were good points to the story, you manage to introduce a new side to Harry and many other characters that weren't mentioned that much in canon. So, update soon?!?!

Hi,
great story so far! It is good to read a good story about the aftermath. In your profile, you are saying that you are taking a break with this story. Do you know if and when you will continue?

Arrggh! It just stopped! Please, please, please write some more! i beg! ;) this story is really, really well written and i would love it f you continued!

Your fic is quite interesting and contrary to me and my emotions. The best canon-friendly fic I've bothered to read is surprisingly easy accomplishment. Your writing, grammar and style, are quite good, for sure. You killed off a lot of people I hate, but they died as an 'accident', and Harry loved to the end... *shrugs*. The fic is very... realistic, much more so than most fics, which, to me, means that yours is much more enjoyable read. Then again, your AverageJoe!Harry is something I absolutely detest. Ignorant, unelegant, stupid, bleh bleh bleh, much like the canon. Every ignorant and ah-so-elaborate 'duh' reply and stammering seriously grates on my nerves. A medicore wizard with great potential but to ambition, sense or desire or gain any power... yes, you write fine canon!Harry indeed. I guess I'll keep watching this..~~

I just read your story and I really like it, so i checked out your homepage and learned that you put the story on hiatus some time ago which makes me kind of angry... of course it is your personal decision to put a story on hiatus or not and I really don't have a problem with that - but the fact is, that you still list it as a WIP. If I'd known that I would never have started reading in the first place!
Please do all your future readers a favour and put up a note about the hiatus and change its status in the summary.
Thanks Tascha

I have enjoyed reading what you have written so far and hope that you will contiune it soon. I know how hard updating can be.

Wow. I wa very impressed with your final batle. Having Voldy absorbe the horcruxes simplied everything anf his attempt to take Harry's soul as an addition was very clever.

I enjoy reading about the Grangers. Killing off so many of Harry's advisors especially her has him a bit adrift which makes for a good story. The whole incident with her body being dropped off like so much trash and its surrounding political complications is wonderful to read.

I hope this story hasn't beed abandoned.

Wow! Just found this and I'm going to go visit the ones you've recommended that I had not already read. During the battles as well as the funerals, I was in tears. Your words were so heart-rending and poignant. Going from one funeral to the next to the next. I'm not surprised that Harry was not in shock just like after the battle. And Holcop is a little s*. The goblins have to be aware of what happens in the wizarding world - it's good businbess sense. They had to know about Voldemort's death as well as Harry's hand in the matter. That Harry would likely be busy if he even survived without injury. And Harry was grievously injured - not physically but mentally.
Do you have a plan why Harry is not taking up the additional seats in the Wizagamot? Especially since he is not letting the entire entity know of all the seats he possesses. And he needs to have someone confront him about the Slytherin seat on both the Wizagamon and the Board of Governors.
It is interesting that you managed to kill off - or otherwise remove - most of Harry's support system.

Attack after attack after attack and they all continue their lives like they used to? Where exactly are you living? I know the wizarding world as written by JKR isn't exactly logic but it isn't a reason to follow in her footsteps.

Great story - are there more chapters anywhere?

I've found this story, so far to be very interesting. I can tell that you put alot of thought into your characters and their personalities. I really enjoyed the Wizengamot session, it was believable.

Interesting story - We are 14 chapters into it and I am not sure I know where it is going. Good luck

I figured out what the Minister is doing! Jim Crow! The civil war ended but nothing will change. Purebloods will still retain all their rights and privileges and just blame and oppress the muggleborns and halfbloods.

I just reread this story. It´s really really good. I hope you haven´t decided to leave it as is.