Honestly, when I first started reading, I wasn't terribly impressed. The sheer angst and darkness of it all...
But I like how it's turning out.
While I think Harry's 'getting over things' a bit too quickly, the flashes of things from the past help balance that out.
Dredge this out of your head, I want some more. :)

Well done so far. I'm a little disappointed that Susan hasn't received more attention yet. 15 chapters should have been enough to at least start the romance.
Speaking of disappointing, You've killed off some of my favourite people... Hermione for one and Luna. I suppose it was necessary for the story, but it almost made me stop reading when you did it.
Could this wind up as a Harry / Susan / Daphne story?

You REALLY need to add more to this story soon. I know my own stories have languished a bit, but this one has great promise.

Oh I loved those last few lines.

I love seeing how Harry handles life after tradgedy. To often he gives up and tries to go back and change things or he doesn't lose anything and ends up living a happy life and having lots of babies in the epilouge. And from the hint you gave of the scar on Harry's hand hurting I think he might reconsider his soliciter. The other guy doesn't seem too bad but the lady tries to act like she has known him all his life.

I've read a ton of fanfiction and I can honestly say I've been waiting for someone to write this chapter. Absolutely excellent and I can't wait to see where you take this story. Thank you!

A nice story...

I was oretty surprised by how well you have managed Hermione's and Ron's deaths and the aftermat...

I see you haven't updated in a few months, which is quite a shame. I think I should apologize, first off, because after you invited me into the Alpha Fight Club to help beta for you I sort of dropped off the map. I wasn't really comfortable in those environs. I'm not arrogant enough to think that my bailing was the reason you haven't updated in a while. I know better than most that sometimes it's just impossible to churn out updates, be it because of real life or simply a lack of inspiration.

Point is, this story is really great, and I can't think of any others like it. I hope you manage to continue it eventually. I have faith that you will.

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Update NOW!

I've really enjoyed reading this story (all at once). I love political!Harry stories. I hope you continue it.

god damn you annoying ** and your pathetic morals.

"boohoo, no slaves, i don't approve of it," blah blah blah.

I'm enjoying this story, but you need to flesh out the characters better. I'm glad to see that you haven't got Daphne falling all over Harry. I like the romance between them to be biting. You have Daphne too normal. She's the ice princess, she shouldn't be blushing. I think your going to make this a political Harry, hope Susan is involved. Keep up the good work! regards

i think this chapter is great, not enough people write true war with a 1/4 of harry's year being killed as it would really happen.i think the deatheaters in the ministry would use the names from the under age magic department as their target list. i would think that at least 90% or more of the muggleborns would be wiped out in such an attack.

this chapter was so heartbreaking !
loved the battlescenes
thanks
nintschi

thank you so much for this wonderful story it was funny,heartbreaking and emotional could not sotp reading please update very soon
thanks nintschi

good story so update soon and keep writing its great.