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roxxihearts 2008-11-24 . chapter 3
well they taste for male rape hte same way they test for female rape. look for signs of tearing and abuse in the place of *entrance*. bruises and such as well. havent ya ever watched law and order: svu? ;O
frixiewulf13 2008-11-12 . chapter 8
this chapter is like SO COMMON... my gawd, its lyk the usual emo-like freak, who feels weak (perfect rhyme!) in addition, there are a lot of grammatical errors... if you don't have time to check your work, you can ask for a beta to check your work before posting it in the internet... in writing, you should be somehow, linguistically competent to create a fictional story... but anyway, i still appreciate that you continued your story...

update soon...
hieinkurama 2008-11-11 . chapter 8
i hope this ime you update sooner because i have to know what is going on with Nauto and Sasuke
YAOIXRULES42 2008-11-11 . chapter 8
Yay!! you updated its awsome still so plaese keep going!
PrincessAyla1994 2008-11-10 . chapter 8
so good, so good.
Crls Nyino 2008-08-19 . chapter 2
Woot uchihacest+abuse is my favorite (hence why I love the angest) you can comfort him Naruto

Great story update when you can (now to read next 6 chapters that are there)
Tenshi no Yoko 2008-03-05 . chapter 1
Don't mind me, I'm just a little review... xD (Puppy dog eyes)

I whisper in your ear
The words you want to hear
You feel the wind and it reminds you
It happens everytime
You stop and close your eyes
You can't deny what lives inside you
Well I know it's hard to see
What is meant to be
When yesterday is so far behind you
Deep inside your soul knows I'm always there
You made me believe the day you surrender to me
The memory will never die
The love that you gave
I'll never throw it away
The memory will never die
The tides take a turn
Another lesson learned
I'm right here but still you wonder
Would you say that you need more
And it's not what it was before
It was before your on your own and going under
Deep inside your soul knows I'm always there
You made me believe the day you surrender to me
The memory will never die
The love that you gave
I'll never throw it away
The memory will never die
Whenever you wake up
Whenever you gave up
All that you had for nothing at all
The bed that you lay in
Remember you made it
And nobody's there to catch you when you fall
You made me believe the day you surrender to me
The memory will never die
The love that you gave
I'll never throw it away
The memory will never die
You made me believe the day you surrender to me
The memory will never die
The love that you gave
I'll never throw it away
The memory will never die
aikotina 2008-02-07 . chapter 8
june first has come and gone. >.> are you going to update? cause, i'd really like that, your story is really good so far! oh, and i don't know if anyones told you, but in your first chapter, you ask for stories like this, look up school days, if you haven't already, i really like that one.
wolfrun1 2008-01-06 . chapter 8
I would be funny if Kakashi started dating Iruka. Since he's going to start working at NaruSasu's school.
Broken Sexed Up Bloody Kitten 2007-12-31 . chapter 8
Heya! I totally loved it! Plz UD ASAP! Pretty Please With Sugar On Top! (both favorites)
cartoon-craz 2007-12-08 . chapter 8
This is a great story! other than sasUKE getting rapped i loved it! But YOU REALLY NEED TO UPDATE THIS STORY!
nellie330 2007-10-17 . chapter 8
-insert a lot of yelling here-
~nellie
Fullmetal komusume 2007-09-08 . chapter 8
aw...please udate.
Fullmetal komusume 2007-09-08 . chapter 3
wow. poor Sasuke-kun.
Fullmetal komusume 2007-09-08 . chapter 2
O_O uh oh. I knew Sasuke gets raped by Itachi, by that first sentance how he reacts when he sees him. I knew he gets raped. I can tell.
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