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Cat's Eye Nebula 2008-10-28 . chapter 1
It amazes me this story isn't more popular than it is. It's been in my favorites for such a long time, and whenever I'm in the mood for One Piece fic I inevitably end up drifting over here. I'm not usually one to review -- I can never think of anything to say -- but this story has given me such pleasure at so many different times I figured I should at least inform you of that fact.

So, thank you. This is a wonderful fic.
roo17 2008-09-26 . chapter 1
good story! loved it!
ShaolinQueen 2008-09-10 . chapter 1
I love how you write! Another good story!
Nevany 2008-07-27 . chapter 1
xD The ending was brilliant.
I really loved it ^^
Autumnights 2008-02-17 . chapter 1
Well enough to kick Zoro square in the head. Now THAT was how it was done.
BAM! These are some great squabbly fics. Seriously, good job. Definatly going into my favorites folder.
sanji and Zoro are such a good stick-in-a-cave/cell/hole/whatever pair. I wish i could find some more fics like this. And please feel free to continue any of these fics. Im rather curious about the endings of some of these.
Artificial Starlight 2008-01-26 . chapter 1
Hehe! I love this one! It was great, the ending was so funny. Perfect! lol. Awesome job! Definately a favorite.
Hikari Yume 2007-05-19 . chapter 1
Oh God that was so funny!
Azamiko 2007-01-11 . chapter 1
Huh, I liked this. It was...fun.
mandarin'peel 2007-01-01 . chapter 1
aw its so adorable when sanji realizes he does love his idiotic zoro ^^
nobiki 2006-12-18 . chapter 1
it kept getting better and better, despite the errors. i really enjoyed the usopp scene.
Rose Flame 2006-10-30 . chapter 1
^_^ Regardless of whether or not it turned out the way it was supposed to, this was still a highly enjoyable read. There are only a few technical errors, and it reads very engagingly. Great job; I hope you've written more...
xxx 2006-10-01 . chapter 1
lol the ending
i really liked the "considering how good Zoro usually was with his hands."line
and yeah
your fic is prety good i liked it
celerystalksatmidnight 2006-06-22 . chapter 1
Hah! It was lighthearted and entertaining. This is a big plus. There were a few tweaks here and there, some sentences that didn't quite flow, and a few mssing words/ grammar blips. That isn't really a big minus, just a note that a bit of polish in that respect would go a long way. The thing that really caught my attention though, was the pacing. When it worked, it worked really really well. When it didn't work, the reader (possibly just me) is left a bit confused. So that's that, good job, it was a fun read.
sylver rain 2006-05-17 . chapter 1
that was just fantastic. Everything. Me just sitting there staring at the screen with this ridiculously big smile on my face... Everything was just... fantastic. I need more from you... eheheXx...
Lina Darkstar 2006-05-17 . chapter 1
That wasn't bad! A few skips and missed beats where an adjective should have been a noun or something like that- could use a beta. Still, very nice and in-character. Content-wise it was very well paced, though the bit about Sanji's hands took awhile for me to get what was going on.
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