| Reviews for Duty Before Honor |
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Mishi Nagano 5/8/13 . chapter 19oh wow, I've loved every chapter of this and I love that for once this is a story where the author accurately describes sex and not just crazed passion that results in no pain even for the first time. And to explain how much of an effect the story in a whole has affected me, I have spent the last 4 chapters thinking of just how strong my boyfriend and I's relationship is, very much stronger than I realized :) Though I can't help but wonder, have you seen the recent chapters of Naruto? Sorry to say, if its a spoiler, but Jiraiya would have been looooong dead at this point, along with a few others. |
Yukino-chan 5/8/13 . chapter 19 gosh! I just read my first kaksaku one shot yesterday and it was just mentioned briefly! but it changed my mind and I started shipping this couple! I am so glad yours was the first fic I read on this pairing! |
Hiei's Ice Maiden 5/7/13 . chapter 19I'm pretty into your take on these stories. As a newly turned KakaSak fan...I'll say, I greatly enjoy them as much as I enjoy her with Gaara. Him still more so, but Kakashi is still wonderful. :) Thanks for the read. |
Crimson Eyed Sakura 5/4/13 . chapter 19I loved this! Great, great story. :) |
LemonDelightx 4/28/13 . chapter 19First all, I would like to thank you for the amazing journey that this story brought me on. It made me laugh, nearly cry (at times) and had my heart pounding and fluttering through out the whole thing. And it is definately one of the most captivating KakaSaku ff I've read and one of my favourites. I love the way you start off each chapter, and I literally read through the entire fanfiction in a one sitting because the first chapter had me hooked xD. The ending was really sweet and cute ;_; and I'm sad that it's come to end. I'll be sure to check out the rest of your other ff because you're such a great author! Keep up the goo work :3! |
KakashiXxXRoseXxXVegeta 4/17/13 . chapter 19That was amazing... As I was reading, I was actually smiling, laughing, tearing up, frowning, and so on. Most of the time, no matter what I read, I sit there with a straight face and keep my emotions on the inside. I really loved this fic. Kakashi's and Sakura's humerous conversations always made me laugh. In my opinion you were spot on with a lot of the character descriptions. When I saw the end of the page in this chapter I felt like rolling up in a ball and crying because it was over xD |
kaykaycookie8D 4/14/13 . chapter 19To be honest, I had no idea if I liked this story, even when I got to the last chapter. I still have no idea. I think I did like this, or I do like this ficlet I guess. Honestly, it's only because of the interactions between the real Naruto characters and Jin, not your stupid, dirty own antagonistic character. Did not like Matsura one bit, he made me wanna hurl all over my lap top. The damn pedo deserved more than to just be sent into an oblivion and have his dick mutilated. But I do. I like this story. It's very well written and you kept all of the characters in check. It got hard to read at times, but I came back and finished it eventually. I tried putting this on the back burner twice but I kept coming back for more until I was finished reading. I think of all the chapters, this one is my favorite. Cause, it ended really really nicely, and not cheesy or heartbreaking or bittersweet lie I thought it would. You have an awesome talent! :) And, you've turned me into a Kakashi and Sakura fan... |
Lotus 4/13/13 . chapter 19 Oh my god. Ohmygod. You. This. I finished this two days ago and I still can't even stop thinking about it. Is this weird. I'm list. This was beautiful and I am so happy you wrote this and I want to cry for happiness I don't know. |
kaykaycookie8D 4/12/13 . chapter 5I almost puked in the beginning! But then it got better when Kaka came back. Poor Saku-chan! :( |
Valaera 4/10/13 . chapter 19I simply loved this story! :) |
Traveler07 4/8/13 . chapter 13So sad :( |
Anon 4/7/13 . chapter 19 I came into this fic a little apprehensive because of the implied rape in the summary (even though it didn't actually happen, phew), and in the beginning I was as I said before apprehensive but willing to take this journey, and I was alright with it, even enjoyed it. But then you made Sakura so /weak/, and she's so not weak anymore. In your fighting scenes she just sits around and screams for Kakashi like the damsel in distress that she was in the first season of Naruto, which is NOT who she is now. That was when this fic began to take a downward turn for me. Your villains weren't anything special and half assed in their motivations (aka Jin, who I would have thought would have way more loyalty to his father and share more characteristics with seeing as Jin is his super-special-awesome son). I could have done without that added 'conflict', mostly because you wrote Sakura as a whiny pansy. She's so much more badass! It was just disappointing and annoying reading her like that. The lemons! Those were very very satisfying. And I commend you on writing them awesomely, because I could never do that. And I have to say that after the villians were gone, the fic started to become a lot better and the ending made me smile and I felt all fuzzy inside. I truly like the KakaSaku ship and you wrote that part superbly. In the end, I did enjoy this fic, and I'm sorry if this came off as a flame, which I wasn't trying to do! I will definitely be reading more of your fics in the near future. |
Disgrace101 4/4/13 . chapter 19I loved this story! I couldn't put it down, literally! If my husband wasn't working if would think I am bat shit crazy with how much I giggled or yelled at my kindle because of something in the story. You did a fantastic job. Congrats! |
sasusaku74 3/19/13 . chapter 19This was perfect. That is all, thank you! |
sasusaku74 3/18/13 . chapter 7Oh my lordy. I'll preface by saying that I am a die hard, DIE HARD, SS fan. They are my OTP and I will fo down with that ship. But oh my cheesus. This last moment and the chapter 6 moment have been the hottest moments I've ever read. And I love me some SS action. KS is my number one crackship but I had no idea it could be so wonderful. AHHHHHHHHHH. Perf can't wait to see where this goes! |