Very well-written. I don't usually read KakaSaku but this was recommended to me by a friend. You definitely did the pairing justice. No cliches; the progression of their relationship was very natural and in character. And you managed to always mix humor in to lighten the mood... I was laughing pretty hard at some moments.

I enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing!

*Shudders*

Matsura EW... *vomits*

Great chapter, very good internalization with sakura's thoughts here. I can feel her dread for the old disgusting pedophile

wa? does kAKashi really have a wart? I gotta google this! >0<

that was really interesting. i liked it

This has to be one of the best KakaxSaku stories I have ever read. You had me crying, laughing, and screaming into pillows as I ventured along with Kakashi and Sakura's rollercoaster ride of discovering love. You write so smoothly and never skip a beat leaving me losing track of time as I read through chapter after chapter. Truly excellent work here. I'm a fan. =)

Okay, wow... I love this story already, and I've only read the first chapter. Your writing is amazing! :D

Coldplay! Hah. ...sorry just had to comment on that. XD

i loved the story...
and i have one question,
can i borrow your poems?
i want to put them in our canticle(a book with literature)
i'm gona put your name on it...
it's just so good...
thanks and please reply

Awesome story, I love all your KakashixSakura stories :D They are so good~!

*Meltsob* that was amazing...

Fantabulous.
I'm glad I stuck with that story until the end.
A happy ending is always so satisfying, and you kept me guessing right up til it finished.
You should go professional. Seriously. Tito Kube would be glad for the help!

S_H
Xx

“Are you a virgin?”
What a way to start the story!
I've read the story until the last update but somehow forgot my promise to comment about the first sentence! ( I guess it's because it just pulled me to read and read <-- result of your amazing powers.)
I really hope you get back to updating this story soon, but I don't mind. I'm currently one of the many people that always await for an update on HoC. That, I might add, is also one amazingly epic story.
Thanks a lot!

Lets just say that I'm at lost for words at this story. Truly captivating, from start to finish. I just couldn't tear myself away, and simple just had to know after all they've endured in the 19 chapters how they end up in the end.

I really liked how you finished this stunning fanfic with “You’d make a really bossy wife.” - it just sounds so ... kakashi-esque and it was a good finishing touch. It leaves the reader's minds to wonder if they're getting married, and how their lives will turn out (namely - if they have kids xD) The idea of fluffy white haired kids... really, are just too cute, honestly. I only thought about it when you included it in one of the chapters?

The way you characterized the characters is to be particularly commended. I could imagine every scene so clearly - and everything they did just suited them so well. But, in some parts, I've noticed, you've kept Kakashi in character, but also changed him in a way that you've made him into your own "kakashi" and you pulled it off really well without strayed off from his true character as portrayed by the owner of Naruto.

The lemon scenes were just..'wow'. I was rendered... pretty speechless because of the explicit description - they were amazingly well written and again, a lot of imagery and emotion. It was really realistic.

The only thing I spotted that could fault your fanfic is the occasional typo .. but its nothing big, probably less than 5 throughout the entire fic.

I'm looking forward to reading your future works.

--shuuxharuka x

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With friends like that... Good story