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| angkat14 2008-07-24 ch 1, | abuseOut of all your fics, this one is my favorite. Comparing this to The Window (the first one I've read), I appreciated the lesser angst and well, I didn't really like the idea of against all odds, so... Anyway, what I like most about this fic is the characterization. Sakura has been portrayed as a young inexperienced woman, whilst Kakashi has really been portrayed as the girl's sensei and so much worldly and experienced. Keep up the good work! Adding you and the fic to favorites. |
| babygirl 2008-07-20 ch 19, anon. | abusewow.thats the most i can say! ur fic was original nd no cliches. no promises of undying luv, just honest! lol that was an awesome fic! ( dont get those alot round here) |
| Mikitsu Silverquick 2008-07-18 ch 19, | abuseFANTASTIC! Loved the ending! I'm sure it might have pissed it off, but I adore it! It indicates so much, like, evern though this it's a "happy ending" it's not really an ending -- more like a beginning. Wasn't expecting kakashi to break down so quickly (liek yeesh, he only avoided for her a year and a bit?) Still, it was cute. And I loved it. Love the honesty in your writing, and the sly-dry-witty-sarcastic humour. It's pure genius. Hope you create some more wonderful fics like this (and just so you know, this fic, your other story "the Window" has officially converted me into a kakaSku. congratulations, you just created another rabid fan.) |
| ashleysays17 2008-07-17 ch 19, anon. | abusei love this story...the chapters were so long that it took me two days around other tasks to read it, but i'm glad that i did...this was beautifully written (as you were most likely told in your other reviews)...i am looking forward to seeing other great stories from you in the future...thanks... PEACE OUT! |
| Kat57 2008-07-15 ch 19, | abuseAbsolutely fantastic story! Very well written and addictive to read! My compliments!! Toodles! ~Keitorin |
| TreeHugger24 2008-07-15 ch 19, | abusewow.. lovely. completely stunning. thank you :) |
| tcl7189 2008-07-15 ch 19, | abuseLoved it! |
| rachel 2008-07-13 ch 4, anon. | abuseyour fanfic absolutely RAWKS ! i LOVE LOVE LOVE it. you turned me into a kakasaku thinggy whatever it is. i'm like, addicted to kakasaku now (: |
| freedomwings26 2008-07-10 ch 19, | abuseWow... Now that's one sorta story you don't see every day. And I was completely stuck to it. Ya... Wow really sums it up |
| yellowis4happy 2008-07-07 ch 3, anon. | abuseLove it. Love the fanfic, love the pairing--love how in character everyone is! :D I hate it when people write fics and have all the characters so OOC, don't you? But this is perfect, and I can definitely imagine Kakashi testing Sakura like that. "It was probably also quite innappropriate to molest one's subbordinates while on a mission, but there one goes..." Lol! That was perfect. xD But I do have kind of a hard time imagining Sasuke and Naruto being all over each other like that. Perhaps that's just because I don't exactly favor SasuNaru, although I don't DISlike it either. Anyways, great job, and I shall continue reading for sure, and right away at that! :D KakaSaku forever! xD |
| mielioschalana 2008-07-06 ch 19, | abuseThis piece was very well written. The way you took time to consider both portions of their relationship, and the social taboo while weaving it into an interesting, unable to stop reading story takes so much skill. Once I started reading I couldn't stop reading it. Very nice job. |
| lostagain86 2008-07-05 ch 19, | abuseI thought i reviewed allready for this story... I read it again and what can i say for your awesomeness? I'll say this...: you can convert ANY fan of [x]saku where x are the other characters of naruto to kakasaku! This story was hot and sexy! Allthough i allready told you, i'll say it again...you are an EXCELLENT writer! Please don't ever stop posting such stories! Thanx for taking your time and wrote such an awesome story! I'm waiting for your future stories! |
| anon 2008-07-03 ch 19, anon. | abuseI've just rewriten and erased about a dozen attemped reviews to express my adoration for your story "Duty Before Honor". It's rare to stumble upon a writer of your brilliant stature... I'm so glad I did. Please keep up with the good work. |
| Blackscarlet47 2008-07-02 ch 19, | abuselol. I love your story! |
| Brazen Device 2008-06-30 ch 19, | abuseI read this some time ago, back when I had no account to my name. Now, finally, I can tell you how absolutely genius this was. The character interaction remains some of the best in it's genre. And the Kakashi/Sakura action was scrumptious. |