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cindy 2008-11-12 . chapter 5
This was by far one of the best stories I have read. The writing was fantastic, story was entertaining, the plot well thought out, and the message was enlightning. Wonderful ending.
sadlyface 2007-09-23 . chapter 1
MAHC,OK, once again very good,completly intresting,kept me entroughed,I loved the whole primise. His hate for Matt, his lust for Kitty,And the final relization after ten days of learning the reality of Matt and Kitty.I believe Billy left town feeling true friendship for both of them. KUTOS...
Regina-sp 2007-05-03 . chapter 5
Very wonderful story! Loved it!
Teri L. 2007-04-06 . chapter 5
Damn! Your story was so good that it made me--who rarely does--cry. Just excellent in every way.
Doc Reid 2006-06-14 . chapter 5
What a wonderful story! Well written and true to the cast of Gunsmoke. Your banter between Doc and Justus is wonderful and charming. Looking forward to your next story. Thanks for the read.
the lurker 2006-06-13 . chapter 5
"Ten years hadn't made a difference, but ten days had." What a great line, and wonderful way to sum up the tale. Thanks for a great read, as always! Loved the character of Billy Justus, really well done!
Matsox 2006-06-12 . chapter 5
Magnificent!
texasrangergirl 2006-06-12 . chapter 5
Wonderful story. I enjoyed it all the way through.
Doc Reid 2006-06-01 . chapter 4
What a very exciting chapter-filled with action! I could see the Long Branch clearly and hear the conversations that took place, as they are very much like the series. Looking forward to more!
the lurker 2006-05-25 . chapter 3
I always enjoy your use of descriptors in your writing, it brings the scene alive for the reader. The character of Justus is particularly well drawn too.
Kathleen Russell 2006-05-22 . chapter 3
Okay, I am so hooked on this story. I need more. This is wonderful no, scratch that, this enthralling. I'm captivated by your style and envious as well. This story has me going. Please continue real so for I am not too patient a reader and I've already read the first two chapter 2 times. LOL I'll read this one again, I'm sure. :)
smithcrafter 2006-05-18 . chapter 2
This story has a very promising beginning. Please keep writing.
texasrangergirl 2006-05-06 . chapter 2
Your write so well. I love reading your stories. I feel like I'm right there seeing it all for myself. This story is going real well your writing it really good. Can't wait for more.

gunsmokefan
Tam 2006-05-06 . chapter 2
Amanda,

How do you do this?? You are an INCREDIBLE writer! I'm from the Yahoo boards and have read your stories there. And have loved them from the beginning. I had almost forgotten about this one. But I won't be forgetting it now!

Terrific!! I've been around for a long time and let me assure you, you are one of the BEST writers we've ever had.

Don't be so long on the next chapter! I can't wait.

Tam
EileenGl 2006-05-05 . chapter 1
You are by far my favorite writer here at Fan Fiction. This story is another example of your great talent. I am on the edge of my seat already with the suspense. I can almost hear Doc yelling at Matt for being up and around after suffering a concussion and also Kitty's concern for him. And now it might be someone else instead of Justus shooting Matt? This is getting scarier! Can't wait to read more.
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