Me likey. me likey very much-y! and that's a big big big compliment from me!

Great job, babes.

Ouch, poor Quisty =( Fantastic writing though. Keep up the good work.

The words trickled to nothing and something cold and bleak shut off the knowledge she'd be unwittingly accessing. It was such an abrupt and isolating feeling that it slammed into her like a physicality she hadn't expected. She faltered in her steps and Xu looked at her strangely.

I loved this bit the most. What i also like about your writing is the ability you have to show the minutest of details without actually 'showing' them. The part whr Cid stood up and his joints creaked? Yup. That kind of detail.

Thank you for the wonderful read. I am looking forward to more :)

Nice