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Reviews For: He's back in town

KcrystalLights
2007-04-14
ch 1,
abuseyou could have made this into a longer fic and a little more interesting...and why did you have to make them out of character...I hate it when people do that.

Well that was the negative...(I hate to write negatives) so here's the positive.

I do like this fic. I really do. But the reasons on the top will let you know why I'm not very fond of it.

*smiles* Keep up the good work in all of your other fics.
tsukigana
2006-05-18
ch 1,
abuselol! i guess i could see botan doing that!

* tumbs up!*
TheDemonQueen1
2006-05-07
ch 1,
abuseShe really should have put him through a bit more torture than that for leaving her for ten years... Oh well. It was good. Ja ne!
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