beautifully written ,thought provocking,charming.thankyou.x

I should have reviewed ages ago, but sadly I am lazy in that respect. This story, and all of your stories, are great. I think you captured Michelle's emotions and insecurities exactly right. And the picture you paint( no pun intended ;)) of Tony is right on the money too :). Always looking forward to more fics and updates from you.

they are just such an adorable couple. they didn't get justice at all. but thats life right?

wonderful story

Hi Erica,

I'm really flooding your inbox today, but I figured you would forgive me for sending a review. After a brief glance at the dismal options for current FFN stories, and an evener briefer thought of doing real work, I decide to reread something worthwhile. I read all your early work back in my voyeuristic days when I didn't review so I thought it was time to atone.

This short fic is wonderful. Both the imagery of Michelle's thoughts as she runs and the symmetry of the dawning day evoke a genuine sympathy for the trials she has endured. This piece also reflects upon her strength as an individual, as well as half of a couple. It has a great sense of give and take that is essential for any relationship to work. This is a much softer Michelle then you usually write but still a very convincing portrayal.

Natalie

*speechless* Wow...that was wonderful...I could see everything happening when I read it, it was if they were there right in front of me, Thank you for the great read!

It always makes my day when I come on here and find an update or new story by you!

This story was great. I loved it being from Michelle's point of view. You are so good at showing Michelle's humanity - her feelings, emotions, and insecurities - without ever having her appear weak. One of the things I love best about Michelle is her strength, but she is human too, and you always capture it perfectly.

And the dynamic between Tony and Michelle is great, as always. *sigh* Keep up the great work.

aw so cute. well written. i love your stories. anyways can't wait for your next story!!

great chapter!
i really liked how you explored the post season 4 michelle in such great depths, i felt as though i was reading her thoughts!

beautifully written!

I swear, your stories just keep getting better and better! It's great that you tried out a different style this time- you totally pulled it off. Can't wait for what you have in store for us next!

Wow, fantastic! You did such a great job capturing what went on in Michelle's head- that's something very few people can do. I love hearing what Michelle's thinking, and how seh feels about everything that's happened.

I also liked the dynamic you portrayed between Tony and Michelle. It was very realistic, I thought- especially the subtle changes in dynamic since S2-S3. Very well done.

I also have to tell you- I was reading this fic, thinking "Wow, I can't believe how realistic and well-written this is! Must... seek...author's other works..." and it wasn't until I hit reply that I realized, "It's Bookworm! I should have known!"

2 words: loved it!

This is so cute I can actually picture an early morning (though it's closer to the middle of the night right now).

"It’s a combination of many things really; those exhilarating first few breaths of cool morning air; the fresh layer of dew on the grass that reflects the sun, making everything glisten; the way her legs burn and sear when she begins to pound the pavement; the feeling of sweat coating her skin and the way her whole body reaches a threshold of emotional freedom where she does not question what the day has in store for her or what will happen when she stops. She just runs."

Hope you write more like this :)