well, I shall finish here... severus is going to keep draco, and I just hate it ... and I never saw it coming, otherwise I never would have read it... not your fault, though...

Well, I felt sorry for Harry at for (for all his injuries) but now I think he deserves them (and worse). I hope that Draco makes him (and Severus) hurt worse for the idiotic trust they placed in him; he is beyond redemption and they deserve to suffer for trusting him, he has already had more then a second chance with Severus he doesn't deserve even more.

It was a really nice story, I enjoed especially the begining. The only thing which I didn't liked at all was that Snape adopted Draco as well. It's not that I don't like it, it's just.. I was in search for a story without Draco, and then at the very end he just comes in again. Still, very good work ;) Voldemort, Lucius and Narcissa were awesome.

I feel sorry for the china in this story. Everybody keeps dropping their teacups.

I absolutely hate fics where Draco is adopted by Severus... and this story was going so well before you brought Draco in... yuck (

voldemort's role was too short however lucius and narcissa made up for that.

AWE IT WAS GREAT

Well, being a parent I say there are so many rules Harry is breaking that Snape would get what he deserves if he thought this was parenting. First of all children know when they are playing and they're perfect happy when the parent plays with them saying yum yum and pretending to eat the mud. Second of all if Harry really thinks he's helping rather than playing he SERIOUSLY needs to be taught the limits of what he's allowed to help with.

And as far as story-telling goes - you know the movie three men & a baby? I hope you don't push this joke any further, because there's only so far it can go.

Something tells me that the last two lines are going to be another case of famous last words.

Superb!

Interesting!

Superb! Go, Severus!

SS should have just slowed the ride himself. Those guys that run the rides at the fair actually do that as a friend and I found out when he would not let us off. We were a little more verbal than SS though (maybe that is just because we could not hex him ;), huh?) Reading on... p

Wonder how long it will take before SS is accepting the food that Harry wants to "share" with him. Love it! p

What a great premise for a story. To see SS fold emotionally for his son before he (or anyone else) treats him badly for many years is so sweet. Lots of promise. p