Oh, how sweet : )

:D Aww that was great. You did a great job building the momentum right up to the end. Thumbs up

That was nice to read. Not something to say much of though. No grammar mistakes (I usually find some). Nothing too. I wish there was more Romance.

ZOMG!
THE AWESOMEST STORY IN THE WORLD!
WOOT WOOT!
*adds to favs*

ah man! how sweet! luvd it

this is really good! i loved it!

Make more!! I really loved it!

wow, very good. that would be a good name. kiseki. is that what you think the kid was named?-Matt

Ohmigosh!! Um, can we say that I loved this story- one-shot... lala thingy! ^__^ It was amazing. You sure are talented! I'm jealous! HAHA. Gosh, this was so good! Okay,so that was my praise! I hope this review brightened your day! ^__^

Wow...I wish something like this would happen in the series! Neji x Tenten rock! Their one of my favorite couples! Soe kawaii!

...GOD DAMNIT I AM CRYING THAT WAS ... SWET

wow... that's beautiful. MIRACLE...

(cries) This was soo beautiful and nicely written. Very cute.

Very well written. Great job! ~_~

Wow! That was excellent! Your description is wonderful, a really good one-shot! Heck, it didn't even seem like a one-shot, it was like a timeline...a really good one. That was...really good.
VxS