oh wow! this is a very good piece. the tone/speech is the same as the books, bravo!

the ending is just perfect!

"There was a kind of unspoken understanding, much as it wrung each of their hearts, much as each longed to put the horn to his lips and blow it in the vain hope that their monarchs would return. Such things were not theirs to command; that was not the way of things."

that was spot on. as much as they want their beloved leaders back, they knew it wasn't their place. *shivers*

and *applauds*

hope to see more from you!

I've often been wondering what the people actually did when their kings and queens were gone... anyway, nice, lil' one shot. :)

well done. i would think that the departure form narnia must have been painful for the subjects since they were much loved there.

Great job on this, and written in the same tone as the original books. Bravo!

Nice short one shot. To the point, very touching view of those left behind. I liked it.