I love the biting sarchastic wit. She's so angry and anguished at the same time. I love the wealth of details, and the circular ending.

from plaidtiger: I really liked how you added so much depth to a character that we didn't know much about. Even though she is a genetically engineered female you gave her as much depth as most people give to Max. I think that's cool. :)

Mizzie Kay's thoughts: Very interesting, how you described her day, in detail how she thought. I liked how you told her thoughts on the raid of Manticore, and how you told how she lived. Overall, awesome, I hope to see more fan fics soon.

This was so real. Every time I read it I come close to crying.

Wow. Very good story, one of the few Syl-fics out there, and beautifully done. Explores the death of the X-5s and their reactions to it very well, which not many authors do. Stellar work, here.

Wow! I only just saw AJBAC and I think that gets right to the root of where the charcters would be! The shock is just too strong, you end up feeling almost numb. Very clever idea of showing it through the cutting th cucumber! All I can really say is wow and well done! A beautiful piece.

Nicely written. Very good insights to a almost unnoticed character. :)

Question, how did Syl know Max is captured and Zack is dead? I think Syl was told by Lydecker that Max was K.I.A, while they (Krit and Syl) told Ly that they caught Zack. :)

Damn, that was good. Very awesome, very dark, very true to the show and the season finale. I liked Syl's inner battle with herself, and her attempt at rationalizing everything. And the last two lines were priceless. Great job!

Wow. That was so emotionally charged and so real! Great insight into Syl! I absolutely loved it! This was brilliant!

Wow! That was so deep and powerful. I knew that there was more to Syl then what we saw on TV. Great work! -LadyCallie

Wow this was a wonderful powerful fic full of torment and emotion. It was very intersting getting into Syl's head and learning more about her. Your writing is full of intensity. Wonderful job!

What a great look into Syl; she didn't have that many lines in the finale. I've been so upset about Zack I haven't paid much attention to Syl or Krit. I'm glad you're taking the time to develop them.

Oh my god, I love this story! It captures Syl so perfectly even though we've only gotten a brief glimpse of her. It's haunting and moving, I absolutley love it. )