 Zegg 2008-09-11 . chapter 1You need to continue this! It's quite excellent!! |
 darkxXxflames 2008-02-29 . chapter 5wah!
it's been a long time now...
this is really a great story...
please update...
PLEASE UPDDATE! |
 Zegg 2007-08-02 . chapter 6Hey it's been awhile since you've updated this is the best story i have ever read out of all the beyblade stories of fanfiction. So you have to continue! Please, i love this story to much for you to stop! |
 darkxXxflames 2007-04-05 . chapter 6this fic is really nice and really hilarious!
please update soon...! thanks!! |
 twin1 2006-12-02 . chapter 6Hey, great story, I wonder why I never saw it before. I love KaiOC fics, and I especially love it when the OC is someone's sister, like Tala's, and that's what you've got. I'm putting this fic on story alert so I can carry on reading it when you next update. Please update soon! |
 Skyia's Will of Freedom 2006-09-24 . chapter 6great chappie please update soon |
 Tory Carmichael 2006-09-24 . chapter 6YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY ! U UPDATED! FINALLY! he he he!! ur going tomorro :( hope u have a safe trip and a good holiday! c u when u get back!! I'll update for u by then!! i think i might update amity and discord, or maybe killer camp or Not so dead. not sure. ah well. talk to ya later! great chappy by the way!! once again, have a safe trip!! bubiiazz!! xoxoxo me!! |
 Ba1thazar 2006-08-29 . chapter 5Yay cant wait for the next chapter. Bet that there gonna b a lemon, at at least the start of one...
I love ur story so plz update soon
B+C=P |
 Zegg 2006-08-29 . chapter 4so are ya going to continue your stories there so good i decided to make my own beyblade stories :p well you better continue or im gonna pull a 12 gage shot gun on ya... |
 bostafu 2006-08-29 . chapter 1 omigosh! dat wus so mean... |
 Skyia's Will of Freedom 2006-08-28 . chapter 5yay you updated..coolies great story |
 Zegg 2006-08-26 . chapter 5You so have to keep making beyblade stories they are so good... |
 xXxLuna-the-ChosenxXx 2006-08-26 . chapter 5keep it up great as always update soon |
 As Silent As The Shadows 2006-08-26 . chapter 5Nice chapter ^_^ |
 Tory Carmichael 2006-08-26 . chapter 5THANK YOU! OH ITS AWESUM!*drools* if it wasn't already there, I would SO add this story to my FAVOURITES LIST! lol!! tamara is so lucky! is the next chapter gonna be a lemon?!?!! hee hee, AND NO IM NOT THINKING OF TAYLOR! |