Not really sure why. But I really love this fic. Actually, its on of the very first fics I read and favorited on fanfiction! And by one of the first, I mean it IS the first one...

Anyway. I like to come back an re read it because I really like it and I REALLY like your writing.

Nice.

Keep trying to break Fenton, and eventually someone will be broken. I would really like to see Vlad learn that lesson... except Danny doesn't hold back this time...

You have juz changed my opinions on Dash. I can see him in a better light now. And thinking back on his ego and all horrible things he done, maybe not. Maybe.

I loved it. I love how you went deeper into Dash's character rather than having him as just the jock who happens to bully Danny. The last line tore me.

I love this so much! You should somehow continue it! :)

I like how deep this is. I cannot verily describe it, but I can see another side of Dash and Danny. Thank you.

this was really good.

An interesting way to flesh out this character.

Wow. This is quite beautiful, in your right to the point illustration of the scene and underlying message that hits hard. Especially your insight into Dash's own problems pushing him to lash out at others. Wow. _

Sooooooooooo good.

I just love this! I am completely speechless. I love the end quote where you say "In this at least, Dash knows something that Walker, Vlad, or any of Danny Phantom's other enemies have yet to learn. Keep trying to break Fenton, and eventually someone will be broken.

But not necessarily Fenton."

It just sent shivers up and down my spine :) Really good!

I liked this story it was different and interesting to read and I like how you portray Dash as smart but like animal smart, i think that is prob the closest-in my oppinion-anyone has showed how Dash may think if he were a real person. Anyways great story!

Wow, this is a really intriguing look into Dash's head, in my opinion. And very well-written- in-character, good grammar and flow... Great job!

Oh wow this was amazing! Way better then anything I could have written! Great job!