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One Thousand Sorrows 2008-11-23 . chapter 8
I normally don't review stories as I rarely feel like I have anything important to say, but felt this particular chapter needed reviewing. You've done an excellent job on this entire story, this chapter most of all. You manage to set just the right tone for all your scenes and manage to smoothly transition from one character and tone to something completely different every single time. Though it was sometimes confusing to try and remember/figure out who a certain character is and what's going on, that's to be expected considering the detailed universe this story draws from and history written in this fanfiction alone. While I enjoy both Ranma 1/2 and The Wheel of Time, I honestly found Wheel of Time boring compared to your story. Ranma is another story, being an entirely different genre.

P.S. I find it funny that Ranma and fanfiction aren't words in 's spellchecker.
tatewaki2000 2008-11-14 . chapter 8
o.o

yay.
WillItWork 2008-10-27 . chapter 8
Wow, very interesting chapter! I am loving this, but had to go back and re-read ch 7 so I knew where everything and everyone was. Crazy!Ranma is very impressive, but where are you gonna take this?

Lastly, many congrats on continuing the grad tradition of epic suffering and sacrifice that marks WoT.
James Axelrad 2008-10-26 . chapter 8
wow, you sure dont believe in half measures for your cliffhangers, do you?
sinhex 2008-10-25 . chapter 8
this being mr. jordan's opius and takahashi's most open ended work, must make this a complicated write. your hard work is a awsome tribute to your skill and to said formentioned authors. thx & k33p up 7h3 l33t wr1t1ng 5k1ll5
Bobboky 2008-10-22 . chapter 8
awesome
Ellf 2008-10-22 . chapter 8
Excellent... very well done.
skywiseskychan 2008-10-22 . chapter 8
Good good fun, and epic oh yes. though I must say, possibly a bit too much so. I do hope to see things begin to stitch together as at one point reading this chapter I thought back to one of the very first chapters of ranma's captivity and thought fondly about that fic before remembering the connection! Yikes

Good good fun and I look forward to seeing things splooshed back together once more. The worlds, our crazy megalomaniacs, all the insane folk running about, and of course how Ranma and Keika will get on if they ever get sane again after this.
Sopchoppy 2008-10-22 . chapter 8
Good Chapter, can't wait for the next.
DTravler 2008-10-22 . chapter 8
Good to see more of this story I have liked both and await the next one. If people do not like long chapters so what you write untill you are done be it five thousand or fifty thousand words. No one said they had to read it all in one sitting. Anyway keep writeing hope the next one comes out soon.
Pine cone necrophiliac 2008-10-22 . chapter 1
Wow, this is just so...wrong. And if i was more of a homophobe, I'd like to say...

"That is so gay..."
ranma chan 2008-10-22 . chapter 8
I like ranma chan yep yep yep good story i'm glad your finally writing again update your other story's to please
ariel stormcloud 2008-10-22 . chapter 8
great story
janissa 2008-10-21 . chapter 3
Hi
Ths Mark in Lace story is very good. A bit confusing at time but I really like how you are (pardon the pun) but weave the story lines all together. i am only up to chapter 4 so far but I am really looking forward to reading the other chapters.
thank you for creating this very entertaining and right now very sad story.

Janissa
Radio Driver 2008-10-21 . chapter 8
Good goin, Blade. Keep on keepin on.
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