kim it's much more cooler that before and i think that was pretty cool :D gosh i just the adrenaline! and shego :D ohmygosh she is so lucky XD i want to read more, please?

Man this is getting good!!

UPDATE!!UPDATE!

looks promising, but you need to work on the chapters; they tend to seem disjionted, almost like you forget the previous ones.

ohh hurry up and update

good chapter. please continue

Good start.