I thought it could have had a little more. Just my opinion though.

Aw...
Nice OE -I mean- EO.
Just, don't ask.
But I DID like it.

This is REALLY good!!

That is exactly what I wanted to happen at that part. Actually, when she walked into the room, and Elliot had his shirt sorta off, I started laughing hysterically, and then I was like, "Kiss the girl!"
it didn't work, needless to say...
good fic. ^-^

i'm lovin' it like...i dont know, some good analogy that doesnt involve fat kids because i feel bad about fat kids now. good job though, i like it.

very very good. im impressed with the emotion through the simplicity. great stuff!

huge fan of the EO!
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