Short, but very beautiful. I love it and now I'm going to go and read the rest of your stuff ;)*adds to favs*

Um... I LUV Ryuichi fics!! but this one, left a lot to be desired... you could improve upon this. It lacks in the description and emotion departments. I couldn't really get into it at all. I could REALLY go so where, it just needs some work. GREAT base camp though!

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too bad it´s just a one shot, this would be a great prelude to another story ^-^
greatly written