YOU are awesome. That was a great poem; anything that forces you to re-read and say "Ah..." is Literature in my book. :D Loved it!

wow. very, very powerful. and very good, of course. "But not all that is fair / Is good." -- very nice.

for some reason, what struck me most was the way it was divided up, with lines streatching across from one stanza to the next. maybe i'm just being spazzy, but i liked it. :D

*feta

Silly girl that I am, I actually finished the whole thing before remembering the mother-names and the quenya names of the seven. Though "craft" could be Feanor too, since he was also called Curufinwe.