 xxGabby-chan182. 2008-06-21 . chapter 23aww^^ I soo loved this! My very first Sokero =3
...Lol, I feel so warm and fuzzy inside xD
-Gabs. |
 xxGabby-chan182. 2008-06-21 . chapter 15Goodie, I swear when I saw that weird guy's name.. it was so creepy!! xS
(scared..!!)
-Gabs. |
 Betty 2008-03-22 . chapter 18 It's a great fic so far!! It's my first time reading a Takeru/Sora fan fic and I can't believe how much I'm enjoying the story. Thank you for showing me how the digidestined are dealing will their problems; like you said in one of your author's notes, many fic-authors tend to just leave out the digimons, or any possible personal problems they may have trying to live a normal life again. I'm also very glad that most of your fic is grammer & spell-checked. It just makes reading much more enjoyable. I also apperciate the unorthodox side-pairings of Hikari/Koushiro & Daisuke/Ken too!! (Although I much prefer Koushiro with someone else, I still enjoyed their interactions w/ each other a lot~~)
I just wanted to point out that Gatomon, unlike the rest of the digimons, is really at her champion form, not rookie form.
Otherwise, everything seems alright so far (even if, according to Birdboy, Scorpiomon did disintegrante, digimons return as digieggs in the Village of Beginning anyways, so it really wasn't a problem there why he was back).
Continue with your hard work; I'm really thankful that you finished your story. Some of my favorites are on the verge of being dead... TT_TT Thank you so much. |
 Sparta's Ghost 2008-02-13 . chapter 23Well, after a gazillion name changes, I'm surprised you still remembered who I was, haha. Now, this is a completed Sokeru fic that was written and finished with a good ending! Yay! And for the record, I can't believe I said "lol" in a review a year ago, or at all, lol. Crap, I did it again. |
 SuperSaiyanTamer91 2008-01-25 . chapter 18i havent finished reading the story yet but i have to say awesome job. I don't know what possessed me to search for sora and TK fics but i am def. glad i did.
great story! |
 cei-chan 2008-01-16 . chapter 14Hey there! :) Sorry for not reviewing in the previews chapters but if I find a story I really want to read I don't want to take breaks :| And now I just wanted to say something before I forget it.
First of all: Thank you so much for writing this! Recently I've been obsessed with Digimon again and started to look for some decent fanfictions. I read like...15 fanfictions (or at least the beginnings) so far and yours is one of the two I really like. (It's always so disappointing to see a good summary and a horrible story to it)
It's not particular a fan of this pairing but what you said is true...if the writers skilled enough every paivring can seem good.
So...secondly...(I don't know why I'm saying/writing/shouting this but) I don't like the way you portrayed Matt :( It's just that I prefer him as overprotectiv over T.K. and (kind of) nice to his friends. But before you think I'm stupid I know why you made him like this. I can read that much and I remember enough of the series^^ And if you had made him the way I like Matt I probably would have said that you're being unoriginal...sorry for mentioning it at all...
And lastly: Another thanks :) I always tend to think under restrictions. But reading your story about a couple that's not canon and making it sound so natural has...uh...helped me?^^ (an unhealthy obsesseion with a tv-show helps me to figure out my ways of life again! yay!) Maybe I'm going to be better at discussions now ... ...yeah...sure...
lol :( I've already written so much and I still have things to say...oh well I save it for the review on the last chapter. Or not depending on the fact if you hated this review and and want me to never write one again :D
So...have a nice day
*C. |
 Birdboy 2008-01-08 . chapter 23It had some excellent moments. (Like the emperor story bit and all the fluffy Sokeru scenes.) The dialogue was excellent and wholly believable. The Daiken subplot was solid, but not intertwined all that well with the main story, and I got the feeling that too little had changed on the digital side... I suppose it's a natural consequence of a world kept isolated instead of integrating with ours like in 02, though.
I wasn't wholly buying the Taichi subplot(He seemed to get over it pretty well in 01) and as for Yama's sadness, it was a bit depressingly repetitive and I wanted to throttle him and ask if he had forgotten Gabumon completely... but I could see it so easily, as well.
The bits and pieces of reused dub puns were annoying, though. A bit *too* much like old times. (Then again, I've *memorized* half the dub. A less knowing fan might not have as many problems with it...)
I'm still not *quite* sure about calling this the best Sokeru fic ever, but that said, I'm glad I gave it a read. |
 Mi Querida 2008-01-04 . chapter 23First of all, I'm glad you enjoyed my reviews. ^^ Thank YOU for writing THE best Sokeru fic I've ever read - and also one of the best Digimon fics I've ever read. I'll definitely be adding you to my alert list, and I hope to see another fic appear soon ^_^
Now, onto to the epilogue, which was nothing short of AMAZING. I love the setting. Not only was it nice to see all the characters gathered together in a believeable place, but it was also nice to see just how much Yamato has changed, and how much he has healed. ^^ The little V-Mon and Tailmon scene KILLED me. It was just so cute. |
 x.angel.of.faith.x 2008-01-02 . chapter 23An update! XD And I was just about to send you some words of encouragement - they always helped me when I was stuck in a rut. :)
I must say, chapter 22 is probably my favorite chapter of all. After months without updates, it draws you right back into the story and brings it neatly to a close - the character interactions shown here are fitting ends to the subplots within the fic. I found the Taichi/Mimi moment in this chapter to be an especially poignant counter to the Takeru/Sora moment; both featured the reality that, after all is said and done, they must return to their regularly scheduled lives. But while the epilogue shows that Takeru and Sora worked around their lives, Mimi simply couldn't uproot herself from her life in America, and that bittersweet contrast made the fic feel more real to me. Not everyone can always have a happy-sparkly-yay! ending.
Anyways, thanks for such a great read! It so strongly captured the feel of the first season, which makes it stand out among most fics nowadays. Plus, it believably meshed the action and humor of the series with the romance plots that we authors so adore. ;) I was surprised to learn that you didn't expect this fic to take the old-fashioned Digital World adventure route, as it flowed so perfectly with the plot. I thought it would have gone in that direction all along! I'm certainly glad it did, though - like you said, it added extra dimension to the fic, and that's what really made it work. This fic has made me fall in love with these characters all over again... maybe I'll even write, or something. ::glances at her own old Sokeru plot::
Good luck with any future writings, and I hope to see you writing for this fandom again. :D
~Crystal
PS: Sorry about not responding to your message - I couldn't figure out how to get to messages from FFN. u_u; Back in my day, we didn't have these newfangled features! XD |
 revilo 2008-01-02 . chapter 23i will be traking u if u do bring up another story. |
 BeautiiQueen 2008-01-01 . chapter 23I can't believe it's finally over! I will always love this story, and it will always be my favorite Digimon story.
Hopefully, you'll write more for TK and Sora.
Well it's be a long ride.
Bye. |
 Oversized Bucket 2008-01-01 . chapter 22I believe I'm the 100th review. That is, unless someone reviewed as I am typing this. Finally out with this chapter, eh? It only took you 8 months. I really liked the Takeru and Daisuke scene there, but not so much the actual Sokeru scene. Don't ask why, because I don't know what I didn't particularly like about it. It just didn't appeal to me, I guess. Anywho, good times, good stuff. Please do come out with the epilogue quicker than you did this chapter. And yes, I do believe this is the greatest Sokeru fic ever devised. |
 Mi Querida 2007-12-31 . chapter 22Wow, so your goal this entire time was "to write the greatest Sokeru fanfic ever"? I'm happy to say that in my eyes, you've achieved your goal - and then some. ^^ Congratulations on officially making me a Sora x Takeru fan. Their conversation in this chapter KILLED me...and instantly destroyed any lasting doubts I had about the two of them.
This final chapter was simply amazing. Your writing has improved dramatically from the first chapter, and it was more than evident in this chapter. ^^ I absolutely adored the conversation between Sora x Takeru and Daisuke x Takeru, what a great way to end things. Takeru recalling the promise he made to Dai was a terrific way to tie things up. ^_^ I'm glad that Koushirou and Hikari are (somewhat) growing closer, and Mimi and Taichi are a least growing to understand they have feelings for each other. Hopefully the epilogue won't be as bittersweet for them! I'm really anxious about said epilogue, hopefully it won't take as long as this chapter did to appear, eh? =P I can't wait to see the reactions of everyone when Daisuke and Ken announce their relationship in particular, it seems I'm still an obsessive Daiken fan. ^^;
Thanks for creating such an amazing fic, and I hope to see you again in the Digimon fandom once the epilogue is complete |
 revilo 2007-12-31 . chapter 22yay last chapter. nice chapter 2 hope the epiloge is up soon are u going to write something like this again. |
 FmaFan10 2007-12-30 . chapter 22well I have to say this is the best Sokeru fic I have ever read! and are izzy and kari going to be a couple?? anyway I cant wait for the Epilogue, because chapter and every other chapter was good! |
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