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| Shadowhawke 2008-08-20 ch 1, | abuseVery beautiful. Loved the poetry in it. :) |
| CuriousBabyVamp 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abusei really loved this fic since it captuers what zutara is: a love that takes time and patience but is a perfect balance. this was really cute. |
| Dracori 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseWow. Very, very well-written and so touching, too. I like how there's no dialogue and how you worked each of the seasons into their growing relationship. ~Dracori |
| knittingpanda 2007-10-05 ch 1, | abusethat's cute. I like how you brought one season into another, like "they also looked to the warmth ...that the warmer days brought them." That was a good technique. |
| Pandora 2007-10-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood use of words. |
| DnCnChIcK369 2007-09-13 ch 1, | abusewow, great job! it was really poetic! |
| flower213 2007-09-11 ch 1, | abuseThia was an awsome poem. I liked it. |
| smilcuziluvu 2007-09-07 ch 1, anon. | abusebeautiful metaophores. i love all of your work, but this one was just so poetic and sweet |
| Aki Kaji 2007-09-07 ch 1, | abusethat, was really really good. AKI |
| Mirage992 2007-09-07 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely love all of the season/weather adjectives and comparisons you used in this piece to describe the unique relationship that is our lovely Zutara. Very well written~ ~Mirage992 |
| Shay Bo Bay 2006-12-31 ch 1, | abusecute i like this one too! |
| Kitty East 2006-12-07 ch 1, | abuse-sniff- So beautiful. Amazing. |
| khfirewire 2006-08-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseAH! That was so AWESOME! |
| smartcheer917 2006-08-02 ch 1, | abuseaw, i think |
| Pavati 2006-06-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseIf I understand the metaphors right, this means Zuko will get her again? |