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| Yrael 2008-08-17 ch 1, anon. | abusei've got a sneaking suspicion that Sanaryelle is actually Garth Nix in disguise, testing the water for a new prequel! :P Seriously, it's that good. :) Keep it up. ;) Yrael x |
| Shrilaraune 2008-07-25 ch 6, | abuseYou managed to make a potentially boring chapter engaging, riveting--and the double blades being touchstones? Brilliant, love! |
| Shrilaraune 2008-07-25 ch 4, | abuseIt took me years to get back to this story. I started reading it about two years ago and always promised myself I would read it--after I had finished the Abhorsen series. Well here I am two years later and I am thoroughly enjoying it. You are wonderfully creative an everything fits--this could very well be a prequel to the Abhorsen series! (I wish it was) Great job! Your author's notes deepen the characters wonderfully. |
| Timayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy... 2008-07-18 ch 1, | abuseYou are a absoulite genius with story! i dont know where you get youre creativity. |
| rockster_11 2008-06-01 ch 48, anon. | abusewow i found this a fascinating story that was very well written. i like your writing techniques very much, and definitely cant wait for more chapters! p.s. please put me in your story if you can, any character is fine! |
| MoMo-ChAn1 2008-05-18 ch 48, anon. | abusePhew! We're coming to a close, aren't we? I don't know how Zavebe can act like that though; courts are different from home. |
| chair-chan 2008-05-13 ch 48, | abuseWow! This story is great!! I finished it in 2 days, instead of studying for my two successive AP tests! (Yes, you now have the dubious honor of causing me--and surely other countless readers--to fail some sort of exam) But I couldn't be happier that I discovered this story. It is amazing, even though it is extremely long. Some long stories just get annoying, but yours just gets more and more interesting. The characters are great, very "Nix". All depressingly mad. At least the bad guys, that is. The really bad ones, not the ones that got trapped into it. :) gotta love it! Anyways, awesome story, rock on, and hopefully update soon? Pretty please? :) |
| NixNoxSox 2008-05-09 ch 48, | abuseOh wow, I checked today just thinking that I'll cruise around for a while, and now I've just read a great chapter! I'm so excited about the Wall being finished - but so sad, too, because that means there's only two chapters left. Oh well, I guess I can re-read all 50 chapters at once. But thanks for the awesome chapter - Zavebe is hilarious, Andromis is awesome for standing up to the king, and Farelle is perfect. I can't wait to see the Wallmakers! They're my favorite of the bloodline. |
| Rainstorm Amaya Arianrhod 2008-05-07 ch 48, | abuseZavebe is definitely not what the Court was expecting. >< However, if the Court can live, two thousand years later, with Ellimere for a Queen it can almost certainly manage Zavebe. It was very good to see more of her- I loved the way Farelle didn't take an instant liking to her, and the way she is sweet over some things, and the way she's a bit sharp- should keep Andromis on his toes. ;) She's a brilliant creation. And yay! We find out about Javen's arm! I've been waiting to hear about your take on the metal-limb-thing for ages, and it's great to see it. I love how it's not just a quick fix, it'll take Javen time to learn to live with it and stuff (and the family-ness of Javen, Farelle, Eligora was adorable. Family-ness is not a word. NEVER MIND.) I think Lirael's hand would probably have been different, more like a glove, but it is a whole arm we're talking about so a glove-type arrangement wouldn't work. Also delightful were the notions of Zavebe knocking the wine everywhere and Dantalion's reaction (politics! politics! I remember thinking, 'was this the lad who kissed to his favourite cousin in the library?!') I liked, too, the idea of Farelle having heard the Great Stones' making as a bedtime story and finding it spooky. On the whole, wonderful. :) -May |
| AdriaDara 2008-05-06 ch 6, | abuseI have two words for you: holy crap. And from me, that means: holy crap! This story is SO good! I feel rather intimidated now... Oh well, I'll catch up on this eventually. And hopefully I will be as good of a writer as you someday! Seriously! It's awesome! |
| Lioness's Heart 2008-05-06 ch 48, | abuseYay! I've been looking forward to this chapter! It's amazing that there are only two chapters left. You've managed to pull another wonderful chapter out of the bag! Long and awesome. Let me just say again that I LOVE this story and I'm already looking forward to the next chapter! Terrific job! Lioness |
| Pied Flycatcher 2008-05-05 ch 48, | abuseGlad to see this is still alive! Nice chapter, nothing like a family squabble. XD |
| Valentine's Riddle 2008-05-04 ch 48, | abuseAs always, a fantastic chapter! I especially loved your description of court- it really reminded me of the scenes in Lirael where Ellimere is describing how Hestia tripped over her sleeve and catapulted into Jall Oren ^_^ Great job, as usual, and I can't wait until the next chapter! Riddle Xx |
| Vanilla Bean CEO 2008-05-04 ch 48, | abuseAw. only two more chapters? I really like Zavebe. She has...a different personality I suppose. I also really like Andromis...good on him for choosing someone outside the norm. Though I am not sure that the Royal Kitchen was the place to declare this. Update soon (but then again not too soon cause then it will be over) from Vanilla Bean CEO |
| ab sab 2008-05-03 ch 48, | abuseOh dear, what will the Kingdom do now that Lady Zavebe is here? She's a most interesting character, and I'm looking forward to reading more about her in the next two chapters. And Felio! I must say, I never thought we'd hear from him again. Lovely to know he's still around! A fantastic chapter, and much, much better late than never. |